Reviews for Chance Encounter II: Pirate Kingdom of Troy
Matteic chapter 15 . 10/26/2007
Je bouts littéralement d'impatience, je suis trop excitée pour écrire une vraie review ! Fais le plus vite que tu peux pour la suite...
Heryn-o-Eryn-Duin chapter 15 . 10/26/2007
Awesome chapter! O... Calchas is finally starting to realize who Paris really is. Go Paris! Woot. :P

I felt really bad for Paris after they burnt Hector's body. :( So sad.

Now I'm really wondering what will happen next with Calchas...

Update again soon!
milou8 chapter 15 . 10/26/2007
I'm curious to know what they're going to do! Too bad the story is nearing it's end ( I hope I'm suggesting that right, if not than please take no offence) because I really like it. I can't believe they just let that man be executed! I hope Priam is going to see that Calchas is a traitor.

Update soon!
XinnLajgin chapter 15 . 10/26/2007
Hopefully this time Priam will listen, I hope.
Gaile2 chapter 15 . 10/26/2007
The funny thing is that Ragetti knows the story because he referred to it in the curse of the black pearl. "This is just like what the Greeks done at Troy . Cept they was in a horse, instead of dressies. Wooden horse."

I'm so sad for Hector! *Sniff*

Calchas wormed his way out of a mess there. And now he knows that his only way to power is if Troy falls because there is no eir to the thrown that likes him even the slightest.
PirateAngel1286 chapter 13 . 10/26/2007
Great chapter. Update soon please.
PirateAngel1286 chapter 15 . 10/26/2007
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Nelarun chapter 14 . 10/22/2007
that last bit with hector made me cry. As much as I wished he could have lived, I knew that his death was essential to the story of Troy... and there's only so much meddling one can undertake... Well done on this marvelous chapter. well done.

Nela
Blackeri chapter 14 . 10/21/2007
Wonderful job. Hector's death wasn't as emotional as I would've liked it to be, possibly because of the missing action, but congrats on a job well done nevertheless.
L. Byron chapter 14 . 10/19/2007
What can I say? it's simply beautiful.. you are a poet, I hope the muses still inspire you. I'm sad you had to kill Hector. I wish you could post jack and barbossas thoughts as they saw this display of honor from Hector "so rare in a pirate"
Matteic chapter 14 . 10/19/2007
Tu ne pouvais pas faire grand chose sur le niveau d'angst de ce chapitre. C'est le moment le plus sombre du film. Tu t'en es bien sortie.

J'ai beaucoup aimé les petits détails comme le chariot d'Appolon, Hades et les enfers...

*songeuse* Donc Hector est mort comme dans le film, mais je ne pense pas que tu gardes tout comme dans le film, si ? Je ne vois pas trop l'intérêt de l'histoire si tu ne modifies rien... (se plaque au sol pour éviter un javelot) Oui, bon, à ce stade-là, je ne vois plus trop ce que tu peux modifier. Je te fais confiance pour nous surprendre.
milou8 chapter 14 . 10/19/2007
You've got the cookie! I would have let the pirates kill Achilles with their pistols! But well I know this is not how th story truly story gave me an idea, I might start on a Troy Lotr crossover with the Fellowship ending up in Troy and helping them protect the city. But it's all just an idea I'm not sure if I'll do it, if I do I wondered if you might give me some hints? Anyway finish the next chapter soon!
Heryn-o-eryn-duin chapter 14 . 10/19/2007
You... You... KILLED HIM. :( Poor Hector! Stupid Achilles *grumbles*

Okay, thats over with, now that was a VERY VERY well written chapter. You seriously amazed me. Your awesome, just plain awesome.

I feel really bad for Paris! But, I don't know but I have a feeling that something really bad is going to happen to someone soon. Hm...

Anyways, UPDATE AGAIN SOON!
XinnLajgin chapter 14 . 10/19/2007
Kami that was depressing but it had to be done.
Calenlass Greenleaf chapter 14 . 10/19/2007
/Paris gripped the wall so tightly that the pattern of the rock was ingrained into the flesh of his hands. As he watched the Greek defile his brother’s lifeless body, he made a promise. ‘By the gods on Olympus and in Hades, I swear I will spill your blood to appease my brother’s spirit, Achilles,” he thought. ‘I will shame you in death as you have shamed him.’/

What way to end the chapter. This part I do remember from reading a bit of Homer. Nasty Achilles. I've forgotten how he died, though...

~Cal
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