Reviews for Powers Trilogy Book I: Powers Revealed
Rugrat247 chapter 19 . 1/2/2009
Awesome. She doesn't even know that's her father. Marik's quite the character, as is Mheralo. Great chapter, AGAIN! _
Rugrat247 chapter 18 . 1/2/2009
Woah! Awesome. Marik so chilled about it all, in a way. I can feel action bubbling up

Another great chapter, as usual! Keep it up.
Rugrat247 chapter 17 . 1/2/2009
Good Chapter. Keep up the great work!

When I read the last sentences, 'Something then drifted down from the floor above. A folded piece of paper.'

I was like. Woah! Awesome. Wonder what it says...NEXT CHAPTER _
searing light dragon chapter 24 . 1/2/2009
Good chapter.
Rugrat247 chapter 16 . 1/2/2009
Haha. Yay, you wrote sleep, dear one...sleep! Awesome.

Mysterious -shifty eyes-

Hmm...I'm guessing Marik didn't mean for Mheralo to find out it wasn't a dream. Keep up the great work!
Kermita chapter 24 . 12/30/2008
Awesome! I liked how Marik is so cool headed about it all. Mhera is worried to find out who is this person once and for all, huh?

Well technically she already knows but... you know.

It's also been a while since Powers Revealed was updated. It's nice!

(I liked the memory sequence. It was original and really 'eye opening' in time. xD )
Crystal Rose of Pollux chapter 24 . 12/29/2008
Ooh, I love the imagery of the network of passageways. The thought processes worked in well.

And I also loved that the clock was analog; analog clocks add to the whole mystery feel.
Rugrat247 chapter 15 . 12/26/2008
So Marik was the one responsible for her unconsciousness?

Interesting. Wonder what'll happen next?
Rugrat247 chapter 13 . 12/26/2008
This was written very well.

The duel didn't drag on and I didn't get bored of it, unlike other duels I've read.

Great work!
Rugrat247 chapter 12 . 12/26/2008
I wonder why she is called Arlomhe in the dreams?

Great chapter, as always! Keep it up with your future pieces.
Rugrat247 chapter 11 . 12/26/2008
Very interesting chapter.

I can't wait to read that event in the story.

This was a great idea to write an event from the future.

I wonder how Mheralo and her father reached that conclusion.
Rugrat247 chapter 9 . 12/26/2008
I wonder what else happened in that dream. I'm sure I'll find out.

I'm guessing Marik is going to duel her.

This should be good! -

Another great chapter!
Rugrat247 chapter 8 . 12/26/2008
Awesome! Telepathy. I wish there were such traits.

'Now go get me some ice-cream! Mwahaha'

Great chapter. Your writing style and description etc. is great!
Rugrat247 chapter 2 . 12/22/2008
Aww...poor Marik! Mheralo aka. Mhera is awesome! I feel sorry for her. I hope her brother doesn't do anything dumb. He really is like his dad! Haha.
Violet Phoenix Rising chapter 3 . 11/21/2008
(cries) That sucked... poor Marik. What happened to the oldest kid? Is it in a later chap and I just didn't get that far? XD

You're awesome, I'm gonna keep reading!
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