Reviews for Powers Trilogy Book I: Powers Revealed
Crystal Rose of Pollux chapter 17 . 7/7/2008
Yep, I caught the references! The note was a nice touch, and I'm curious as to who wrote it!

And Marik nearly falling into the hole amuses me... probably more than it should...

And, yikes! Another piece of paper!
Kermita chapter 16 . 6/20/2008
Wow, I'm interested!

I'm seriously looking forward to the next chapter! I'm wondering however, if the bold italics was Marik?

Just a guess! XD I like that line, "Sleep, dear one...sleep"

I. Can't. Wait!

Crystal Rose of Pollux chapter 16 . 6/12/2008
I loved that "sleep" line! It worked so well, and what a dream that was! Was that Marik's voice she was hearing in the dream?
PsychopathicPrincess chapter 15 . 5/16/2008
oh a stranger..o.O...

i have the feeling Marik is planning he?

can't wait to read more

update soon
Crystal Rose of Pollux chapter 15 . 5/15/2008
Oh, poor Mehra...

And I wonder what Marik is going to do... I'm almost wondering if he planned this...

Great work!
PsychopathicPrincess chapter 14 . 3/25/2008
o.O...the scene that mentions Filiron is that gonna be in your other fic of how they met?

can't wait for the next chapter

update soon
Crystal Rose of Pollux chapter 14 . 3/24/2008
This is going great!

Is that bit about Filiron a foreshadowing of "Jeweler"?

I like the line about Marik and Mhera being mirror images!

Great work!
PsychopathicPrincess chapter 13 . 3/6/2008
yay!its finally updated!

i liked the duel. poor Mhera lost...

can't wait for the next chapter

update soon
Crystal Rose of Pollux chapter 13 . 3/6/2008
This is great! I like how Mhera's deck has the heir/heiress theme!

So Marik has the Raider, too! That's cool!

What lies in store for the Ishtars now...?

Great work!
Crystal Rose of Pollux chapter 12 . 2/10/2008
This is really good! I love how Marik tells Mhera that she over-thinks everything!

Again, really great!
Revea-Lacie chapter 1 . 1/29/2008
Wow, you have a really great writing skill, it's very interesting and I'm starting to really Like Mhera-chan . GREAT JOB!
David boreanaz's wife247 chapter 12 . 1/24/2008
i thought it was a good story
PsychopathicPrincess chapter 12 . 1/6/2008
eep..can't wait to see how the duel goes!

update soon
Failingwithstyle chapter 12 . 1/4/2008
Oh another interesting chapter! *claps*
GlimerOfhope chapter 12 . 1/2/2008
Good! update soon!
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