I'm sorry but what is the point of them getting angry when they just kiss and act like they aren't upset. Well where is the love story. I don't feel it at this point I hate them together. Also the time line is hard to follow I didn't realize how quick time was passing by. I also just found out the Draco's 28 really my lord I thought they were like 19 or 20. They need to act their age not their shoe size lol.

Your version of Hermione Granger is one of the worse that I have came across. I'm sorry man a stupid Hermione is not something I can get into. When the hell did she become a scaredy-cat and hide under a freaking table she's a freaking Gryffindor. Also come on Luke WTF he was calling her freading name the dude was getting rape and she's acting like the victim. WTF ever

I like how it's easy to read your story. It flows so well. However what the heck is up with your Hermione Granger wow talk spoil, childish, and immature behavior. Hermione is professional steady minded could think and be reasonable and the craziest situation, but to throw a tantrum I find it ridiculous.

A lovely, heart-warming and clever story. Draco and Hermione’s ‘play-fighting’ and antics were hilarious. Only one observation - I understand ‘cotton candy’ as candy floss and ‘Fall’ as Autumn, etc, but ‘stoop’ in the UK only means ‘to bend one’s head/body forwards and downwards’, so totally unconnected to front steps.
Stay safe. Off to read the rest of your stories.

I don’t think Hermione would get her sums wrong, hahaha...

Just the first chapter and Im already beyond excited

Happy ending. Loved it. Nice that it wasn’t all sweetness. Showed both of them vulnerable. Thank you.

Well that didn’t go well.

Wow. Can you say tension

Second time reading but the auction items calculation bugs me as its incorrect... urgh.

This is perfect. Thanks you

This was amazing!

why is she such a cocktease?.. i feel for Draco

I never know what to expect as I continue to read but I can’t stop laughing

loved the end!