Reviews for Bloodlines
Guest chapter 5 . 5/30
Enjoyed this story. I feel there probably several souviniers left in Dean's past, with his many encounters. Hope you have written more of Hilly and little Mary Samantha. Thanks Sasha £££
soundoftragedy chapter 5 . 3/19
im in love with this fic, thank you
Guest chapter 5 . 5/6/2016
Loved this one. Usually dont really like ocs but this was really good. Hope for a sequel one day, maybe about deans deal? Rally good keep up the awesome work
ArcanePracti-cat chapter 5 . 2/15/2015
Hilly was an interesting character. Hmm, neat little story here.
Fi Suki Saki chapter 5 . 4/10/2013
Ohhh... I can't stop wondering what will Mary think if she finally know that her real parents is Dean and Hilly!?


Oh, and I can't stop myself to say Mary's name as 'Samantha'! XDD lol sorry


Sam was smart to notice that fast! Normal people will think that more than twice before said that bluntly!


Ah, I actually laugh when Dean told Sam how angry Hilly was at John and when John shortly said "sorry" to Dean and then hung up! NICE!


Good fic! Fun read! ;)
laurieglory chapter 5 . 2/4/2013
Good. I always figured Dean would have a kid out there somewhere. Like the adpotion twist you put in and showed his paternal side without making it sappy. Keep up the great writing. Im a major fan now :)
GLuisa88 chapter 4 . 12/5/2011
I hope you plan to do a sequel! Please?
GLuisa88 chapter 5 . 12/5/2011
Oh gosh- so sweet!
The-Situations-R-Critical chapter 5 . 12/28/2010
Cute story. I think Dean would have made a good dad, but it was a great fanfiction. Good job!
elkohl chapter 5 . 2/24/2010
Thanks so much for the great story and your wonderful off!
Crimson Ivy chapter 1 . 1/14/2010
Hilly is a great character, the idea of a tough girl, female version of Dean is fascinating. ;) I will not pretend that their shared past and little Mary weren't surprising for me, but after a while I got used to the idea. And I liked it even more when Hilly proved herself to be a good friend of Sam and Dean. It would be nice to see something like that in the show. It would be nice to see Sam and Dean somewhere feeling comfy and accepted. That is why I loved the idea of the Roadhouse and I regret that Mr. Kripke has decided to burn it... :/ I have read in an interview that he didn't like the idea of boys having anything close to home... What a waste! :/

I know that you have already written 2 other stories with Hilly, the last one had a very specific ending and I hope Hilly will appear in your future stories...
x.lizzy.x chapter 5 . 6/2/2009
aww! I really liked this story! :D I could see it all bein played out in my head which is normally a sign of a very well written story :D

nice job!
x.lizzy.x chapter 2 . 6/2/2009
aw! I really like this story! it's very cute! :D

and I LOVE the fact that Mary is Dean's daughter...I had a feeling from the beginning... :)

I kinda like the idea of Dean bein a daddy, kinda like he wanted to be with Ben...I think he'd be a good dad :)
Merisha chapter 5 . 5/13/2009
'“Dean…” He was at a loss for words. His brother drove him stark staring nuts sometimes.' ROFL :D - I can just see Sammy' bitch face here :D - I love that Milly has insurance cards for the boys :D - and what a wonderful ending, bitter sweet. I really like Milly and Mary, and I like the way you handled the subject matter, very true to the storyline :D - my heart breaks for Dean 'cause I can imagine how hard it must be for him to leave his other family behind. Beautiful stuff bud (blows nose)

Hugs and luv

Mish :D
Merisha chapter 4 . 5/13/2009
Aw, panicky Sammy and Milly YAY :D - I love how Dean's injuries affected Sammy and how Dean is always checking to see if his little brother is alright. Beautiful :D - I may be grinning stupidly right now, you'll never know LOL :D
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