|Reviews for Demonic Brothers|
| Guest chapter 14 . 10/20/2013
I like it but it should come later or do a time skip
| Tiron chapter 14 . 7/22/2013
please dont do a crossover, even though i could see how it would work, i'd prefer if you just stuck to the naruto world, no cross-world story mixing
| gabriel perkins chapter 14 . 5/16/2013
i wouldnt mind a cross love the story
| KyuubiNaruto4444 chapter 14 . 2/26/2013
this is a great story i wouldn't mind if you make it a crossover and if you are wondering why this is my first review i prefer to read the chapters and only review when i feel i need to some stories i hardly review at all maybe only once or twice so good luck with your story and i can't wait for the next chapter to be added
| lexieford chapter 14 . 10/19/2012
| SilverRyuu chapter 9 . 6/26/2012
Great story so far! (I'm on the 9th chapter)
I only have one problem with it. Some of the conversations got confusing because I couldn't tell who was talking. Generally it's fine because there are only two people, but when there are 3 people present during the conversation, it's best to mark who was talking before or after the sentence to avoid confusion for the reader.
(example): "I'm going to be Hokage," exclaimed Naruto.
"In your dreams, idiot," Sasuke deadpanned.
"Yeah, like that would ever happen," Sakura agreed.
See, it's makes who's talking very clear to the reader.
Other than that, I greatly enjoyed the creativity this story brings to the Naruto Fanfiction world. I hope to continue reading your excellent work!
| puma1sunfire chapter 14 . 12/19/2011
NOO! Damn that was far to short. Awesome story. I enjoyed it and I look forward to seeing what else you have written.
| iamgoku chapter 14 . 12/8/2011
yes i think you should do a slight inuyahsa crossover
also i think this story rocks cool romance and everything also you should be commended for having kyuubi be naruto's fater ..genius )
| Cupitor chapter 14 . 10/21/2010
No,no,no! (count as 3:D) please,don't make it a crossover with Inuyasha! it would take your precious time. Better write more about gaara/N. freindship,romance part with haku/N,gaara/?..and some original plot fully in naruto world. Anyway...update soon!
| Mad-reaper748 chapter 8 . 10/14/2010
lol blade reference 'i cant tell you they'll kill me..ill kill you motherfucker i'll just enjoy it more' almost didnt catch that its a good story keep it up. YOUR REVEIWER , HORCRUXXX
| xxnine-tailed-vixenxx chapter 14 . 4/20/2010
no crossover its great and dosn't need diffrent characters other than naruto people
| Black Ace 0 chapter 4 . 3/12/2010
| MarineWolf1994 chapter 14 . 3/9/2010
Hey, great story. I especially enjoyed Kakashi being an asshole. Well have a great day!
| TigrezzTail chapter 14 . 1/20/2010
I haven't reviewed previously, but I have very much been enjoying your story. Concerning your poll, I'm not sure. I can see where the story would be interesting both with & without the Inuyasha characters. But, I tend to be more of a purest, so I think I would go without. Just stay in the Naruto universe
| MrMcDonald3000 chapter 14 . 1/18/2010
make it a cross over