Reviews for In a Glass, Darkly
Anna McNarin chapter 9 . 7/9
That was nuts, and probably not the best thing to read until dawn. Oh well! :)
Guest chapter 9 . 7/7
wtfffffffffffffff :O I AM DEADISH
Guest chapter 8 . 7/7
hey this is good
the yellow flower chapter 9 . 5/25
Wow I didn’t realize this was 11 years old! Okay cool. I have to say that the last chapter was my far my favorite next to the first. I came to this story to check out some horror. Itglued me in from the beginning. Not going to lie, I can appreciate some smut but there was a lot to this story. I sort of wanted more of a build up there. I kind of wanted Sarah to have more of an internal struggle with her physical desires especially when she first “kisses” him and especially especially when his body is rotten. GROSS. If his lips were that bad to kiss I really wanted to barf at the thought of his lower areas. I sort of what to take a tally of how often “Bastard” was used because it was all over the place. I would have loved for some of her insults to really cut to the quick and be more personal rather than a repeated word of insults I enjoyed the dream philosophy. I also enjoyed the power play. I like the trippy stuff. Aaron’s wish slayed me. So deserved. Poor kid. I thought Sarah was a selfish and I liked that Jareth pointed that out. My other wonder is what made her so special to him. Since many have played the game, what did she do that really struck out to him? Beauty is one thing, sure. Creativity, sure. But I sort of wanted more on that subject. Also...I’m glad you went into the more consuming part of their sex in this past chapter. Maybe it’s just me but when Sarah’s allowed him to do “whatever the hell he wanted” I thought he was rather chill in comparison to all the messed up things he could have done beyond light bondage and biting. Lastly, it’s interesting that some folks got so insulted. It’s FF. C’mon. And you were up front from the beginning about what this was going to be. Anyway, thanks for the story! I’m going to go check out another one of you tales
the yellow flower chapter 8 . 5/25
WHOA was not expecting that!
the yellow flower chapter 6 . 5/25
Yup. I’m concerned about the wine. I’m also wondering if Sarah’s somehow drugged with need of sex or something. This was crazy.
the yellow flower chapter 5 . 5/24
So much unraveling here...I’m beginning to wonder what are dreams vs reality for Sarah. And now she’s sick? Is he making her sick somehow? Also, he has elements of a demon. Very creepy. I hope Ben can help somehow! Interested to see how religion plays into this...
the yellow flower chapter 4 . 5/24
My eyes are pretty wide right now...and I can’t seem to stop reading. I’m going to clutch my pearls and keep reading...
the yellow flower chapter 3 . 5/24
Metaphorical barfing. And so many cringes.
the yellow flower chapter 2 . 5/24
You’re interpretation of Jareth in this chapter is the stuff of nightmares and what’s worse Realistic ones. I was so worried about that needle. So effing worried. Guess I still am. I’m going to keep reading...
the yellow flower chapter 1 . 5/24
Um. Well that was terrifying. And I freaking loved it! No joke, there was a point where I stopped reading and hugged my dog. I love the psychological aspects of this and the dream interpretations. Very, very cool. And so creepy! Oh that poor kid! A needle in the eye? OUW!
JuJuwana chapter 9 . 4/25
Amazing. Disturbing. I think you scared the life out of Really, really good!
JuJuwana chapter 8 . 4/25
Oh my GOSH! Jareth won..he won! This is crazy are brilliant!
JuJuwana chapter 4 . 4/25
I have a strange thought about this story..Jareth has gotten better looking. Will Sarah grow hideous..?
JuJuwana chapter 3 . 4/25
Oh, this is so revolting and disturbing..I find myself giggling out of half horror, half fascination.
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