Good story. Keep up great work.

Omg this was brill!

Masterpiece!

I have no idea how, but you took two characters I'm neutral about and made me really feel for them and their relationship in 20k words. This was genuinely an amazing fic. I don't care for smut but this was so intimate and genuine that I really enjoyed it. You're one of my favorite authors, your characterization is amazing!

I love the long story. Very great end.

i read this years ago when I was probably 15? I'm 26 now and this is still one of my favorite fanfics. You keep them so in character that the crack couples feel cannon. I wish you still wrote!

Introspective smut is the best kind. Thank youDefinitely agree with previous reviewscharacters are instantly recognizable from canon in the way they think, talk and act.

Temaris sexy reaction to him, being hot and bothered and knowing she was attracted to him was the best part of this.
That and I want to have a sexy bath now. Their intimate scene had a few repeat words and could have been shorter (less hand and fingers digging in his shoulders for example) but the intimate and lovely act of kissing was written very well and rang true to me.

One thing is that I think the doors in this whore House would have been traditional sideways sliding doors of that was the theme, kimono, bath house, Japanese, etc.

Deidaras art explanation was also very good.
Thanks for making this a good un!

Well, this was definitely unexpected.

All I can say is wow.

Like I am blown away wow.

Stellar job!

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I freaking love this story. I've read it a bunch of times over the years.

It's just fantastic. And you write all the characters so beautifully. Thank you!

Wow! I was sceptical to how this pair would manage to feel natural, but you managed to pull it off well! Thank you for writing this and sharing it with us!

I've stumbled upon this years ago, but i wasn't that much interested in it. But now that i've decided to read this, i'm hooked! I love the interaction between kakuzu and temari i wish there were more. I know this this fic is old, but i just want to drop a review.

This was. Holy shit. I just, I have no words?
My friend recommended this to me and, i'm so glad she did because this blew my mind.
I cannot compliment you more.
You're a wonderful writer.
God tier level.
Thank you for this.

This fic is such a delight. I know it's absolutely bizarre in the sense of, these two characters formulating a relationship when they never even met in canon etc. Like you know the basic stuff people will say regarding anything out of canon, but this is wonderful especially with how you wrote these two.
I love your Temari characterization because I think you have her nailed down, as for Kakuzu he's perfect. A true enigma, very jaded, just like you mentioned in one of the paragraphs.
Their intimacy and the way you wrote that growing attraction Temari had is so incredible. It just made it all the more intense, and I love it. I do.
It's wonderful how you played these two so well and made them come out so real.
It felt very much like canon. Deidara in this was also a pleasant surprise, and I liked how Kakuzu connected the two (temari's and deidara's) on their stances on life and art and how it dawned on him. I love that sort of realizations in fics. This is such a good. Honestly and truly.

So many things to say, so little patience to type it out.

Here we go!

I love,love,love LOVE this! Kakazu amused me so much with how he treated her XD I couldn't stop smiling like an idiot!

Temari still believing she could do it was so much like her character!

I started reading this out of interest for two things; 1)Because I'm partially in the crack ship boat going on XD

2) Because I wanted to see how you would do it. And let me tell you; I am convinced! I swear, if Kishimoto used this exact story line to bring Temari and Kakazu together, I would be satisfied. I realy would be XD

I love Deidara's litte moments and how he used the tongue on his hand; it really seems like something he would do XD And I've only recently started enjoying his character a lot, so this was fun.

I have to admit, my favourite part is definitely the steamy moments. DO NOT GET ME WRONG, I'M NOT A PERV! BUT THE SCENES WERE SO PASSIONATE THAT I JUST HAD TO LOVE IT!

No one here can judge me! I know that the only reason most of you are here is for the sex scenes! (Just kidding XD)

But I truly love it all! Steamy moments and everything!

This whole thing has me in love! Let's also add in the fact that I'm a sucker for the mysterious character that I know not a shit about, in some love thingy with someone a little less secretive X3

Anyway, enough yap-attacking from me XD