Reviews for Harry Potter and the Baby Project
mlmary57 chapter 4 . 10/23/2015
I hate cho
crazy1person2you3been4warned chapter 4 . 1/27/2013
I think this is a great story adn I hope you keep writing.
readingpower chapter 4 . 1/7/2013
also harry would not negle ct his childfren, he doesnt likew fighting, and thered wouldnt be abar in a school
readingpower chapter 4 . 1/7/2013
adding to my other comment (ch 1)

he wouldnt call hermione a bitch, they are friends

and her saying are you defying me makes her sound like a prissy brat.

and considering she folled all the uys into loving her, she has no right to be je;ouse
readingpower chapter 1 . 1/7/2013
I like the plot and this s well written

cation this has flames

harry know how to cook

Raina is a mary sue because
people say she isperfect
she hates imperfectionm
she has the perfect look and voice
she can charm anyone
she named her child after herself

if she was a veela she would be disowne dbecause malfoy are all for blood purity.

Raina is the one who should be in anger management b/c she started the fight and was the one who cussed harrys friends. harryu ws just protecting his friens hermione wouldnt agree with Raina

if she isnt letting him see there children she cant complain and why isnt she losng points fr a bad marriage and speaking i that, how is trowing someone out part of marriage.

also, just because harryis takling to a girl dosent mean they are dating. you said she didnt like him so why is she planning cho demie? and "Im upset he isnt hiding it" 1)they would be tipsy 2)she is acting like she hates him and 3)it is a FAKE MARRIAGE!
Guest chapter 4 . 1/7/2013
Harry was protecting his friend and rain has anger management because she yells at people for not being perfect, and started cussing people for no reason

That's what I think but I like the plot but some things seem out of charecter
Guest chapter 3 . 1/7/2013
Good story but harry is acting way out of charecter he cooked and cleaned for his aunt and uncle and riana sounds like a borderline marysue in my opinion

Oh and are you defying me makes her seem mean and makes her act like a queen.

Sorry if any of this was mean but it's what I think
Guest chapter 1 . 8/12/2012
So far this story sounds a story you could tell the whole family.
Tmctflyboy chapter 4 . 11/2/2008
intersting story, but come on does harry have to be an idiot. didnt he spend like all is life cooking for his uncle, aunt, and cousin? anyway thats all i have to say
BrownEyedDreamr chapter 4 . 5/4/2008
please update, i can't wait to see what happens next
nathanal1992 chapter 2 . 2/18/2008
Harry n'est pas sencer savoir cusiner à cause de sa famille
Ero-kun chapter 4 . 2/17/2008
Interesting story... I hope you'll update soon
mike raven chapter 3 . 2/17/2008
harry kowns how to cook and clean
love2bug63670 chapter 1 . 8/4/2007
Pretty neat, I'd really like to see how this go's.
the perks of being divergent chapter 1 . 8/4/2007
Good idea and good start! update soon!
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