Reviews for One Last Time
BakaRamenBowl chapter 1 . 7/7/2009
i didnt get the end...

BakaRamenBowl(miso uzumaki namikaze)-[-M-U-N-]
Swinny Fluviru chapter 1 . 11/8/2008
I wanted to cry but i couldnt, my eyes were just too dry. :P

and GAH! I'm just dying! D:

1) Maybe… it hadn’t been a dream?
sandsibcrazy chapter 1 . 7/20/2008
almost made me cry...
My Chemical Romance Dude chapter 1 . 11/25/2007
u.u you made me cry! wha'd you do that for? seriously though...good one. Though this sounds like somone like Neji wrote it, imagine "and so Tobi knew to follow his fate- the end"
yangires chapter 1 . 10/13/2007
Aw... That was so good. Really well done! The ending was a bit confusing but I liked how it was open to intrepretation, and I seriously love how you protrayed Tobi's other self.
Ribbon-chan03 chapter 1 . 10/7/2007
*sniffle* that made me cry! lol
la la chapter 1 . 9/23/2007
so cute!

you wrote it great, I was just a bit confused at the end, as to if Deidara was alive, if it was all a dream, etc.

Did they even have cameras back then or whenever?

LMAO i'm kidding, great job with the story D
RioDios chapter 1 . 8/18/2007
InBrightestDay chapter 1 . 8/7/2007
Aww so cute
Neko-Kanojo chapter 1 . 8/7/2007
Wow... that was soo good!

Really, well done!

its really sad and cute, i too was very sad

when Deidara died... TT_TT

(yay 1st comment)