|Reviews for On A Day|
| Guest chapter 3 . 8/4
Absolutely great! Keep at the story man, I'd love to read more chapters. _
| sora122122 chapter 3 . 4/2/2013
After seeing the end of Elfen Lied for the second time I actually appreciated the series much more than when I had when I was younger. (I had watched the series for the first time at sixth grade. Too young if you ask me. xD) And I actually didn't like the series back then because at a young age I didn't really look past all of the gore and nudity. But after rewatching and series (and shedding a few tears!) I came to find I loved it this time around and watched the OVA (which only made me want to cry again) and finally I found out the manga had a completely different plot to it. So I went and looked it up and read it, sobbing my eyes out (yet again) because the manga ending was actually exponentially more tragic than the anime and so I decided I needed to read a fanfiction stat where it had Kouta and Lucy together living happily like I wish a thousand times. xD And this fanfiction I found to be tremendously flawless.
To be able to play in as a role of Lucy's thoughts you really have to be in depth and address a lot of things at once, which a lot of authors neglect when writing her. And wonderful vocabulary on top of that. I adored how you wrote her as she acted in both the anime and manga; very distant and serious, but seeing as in the fanfiction she has opened up to Kouta which makes it heartwarming and made me feel a lot better. xD But still, you wrote her to put herself out for Kouta and to compromise for his desires which I found absolutely lovely; since I imagine if she stayed behind in the anime she would've acted that same way.
The ending scene was written beautifully and tastefully and I love how you used to no slang or obscene words to describe it, which I struggle with myself to find ways to address said action. It is quite seldom I stumble upon a nicely written scene like this. Very, very good!
I apologize for the long review, but this story had a massive impact and I admire it enormously. It really made that big hole in my heart for this series fill up a little with this. c:
All in all, amazing job, keep up the great work!
| CherryTree chapter 3 . 1/4/2013
*screams* Noo! Help! *engulfed by fluff tsunami*
This was so adorable! If you ever write anymore, you can bet all your money I will be the first to read it!
| Guest chapter 2 . 11/21/2012
i think you portrayed Lucy's character perfectly
| Miiso-soup chapter 1 . 7/24/2012
"Perhaps there is beauty in insanity, but who's watching for it, anyway?"
I found that line incredibly close to home, and I just want to say you're amazing for writing this beautiful work of art.
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/17/2012
"I worked hard on it..." I just finished the anime and I didn't get this line at first... but then I thought about it for a minute and a tear came to my eye. Awesome fic. I haven't even read the lemon yet and I already love it.
| Bon chapter 3 . 2/23/2012
| Guest chapter 3 . 3/28/2011
Alright, you can notice me now on how i write and my name.
One tip, Don't make a whole chap about SEX SEX and SEX.
| Guest chapter 2 . 3/28/2011
Me again, keep writing em dude, or girl, lol...
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/28/2011
I'm speechless... This chapter... Even with those simple words... They're so... Touching... Keep doing what you did best writing this story...
| Skelo chapter 3 . 7/24/2009
You are the only author of elfen lied lemon! I love it upd8 it soon!
| The King in White chapter 3 . 5/20/2009
Just write more romance.
| Atra Ventus chapter 3 . 3/18/2009
I vote for killing Yuka.
| EurekaXRenton chapter 3 . 10/17/2008
lemons more lemons
| thecastbusta chapter 1 . 6/27/2008
oh if u misunderstood about what i said about havin a problem with lemon scenes, i meant i have a problem writing one cause i always make it sound corney,