I loved the SessKag moments though I'd have proffered they stayed together. And the fact that Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru are traversing the scroll together is hilarious xD

He's gonna be so mad! I'd hate to be the first person he sees

All altruism is selfish. Wow. Cynical, but I so agree with it. I love Sesshomaru's character here and his wisdom. You must be very interesting person to converse with. You truly show the immense difference between hundreds years old youkai lord and young and still innocent human girl. Maybe it's because of that Kagome annoys me so much at times... But someone has to be the foolish and ignorant one so they can learn and mature.

Wow, I loved this chapter. I hope Kagome finally learns not to make naive assumptions.

But I have to admit I'm starting to hate the words "school girl", you use it far too much and I already saw some little foolish naive girl who needs life to bitchslap her, now it's even worse xD

I am with Sesshomaru in this. Kagome never learns, she only thinks so. And sometimes she is so righteous it seriously annoys me, I get empathy, but to act upon it when you don't even truly understand the situation or the person? Foolishness. Also her temper is just urgh, that's exactly why I was never a fan of InuKago pairing, in this they are too similar... Maybe this story will end happily, but I think she needs some very serious wake up call. However I love the fic as a whole, you have incredibly beautiful style

Beautiful story and very well crafted in the evolution of the charter growth. I cryed and laught but cryed in the end oh how I wish they would be together beyond the pages. Then I laught again at the image of Inuyasha as the moon princess hahaha shiro must be happy to have 2 pup for a visit. Xxxxx no words can exspress my love for this story xxxxx good job .

This is a really beautiful story. I love the imagery and growth. I wish that there was more to the epilogue though so we find out whst happens to the characters after. I do so enjoy that snippet of Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru at the end.

Omg...that was fantastic...amazing...wonderful. ..heartbreaking. ..breathtaking. ...lovely. ...oh I can't find the right words anymore...thanks so much for writing and sharing this...

But honestly...I can't seem to get rid of the spreading grin...thinking about the 'awakening' in the last story *rofl* poor kagome, if he gets his hands on her

Well. The Dragon King named his children after his dead brothers. Oh. That's... A bit painful to the ol' feels there, bucky. /incomprehensible sobbing

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Wonderful writing, by the way. A plot, great literary mechanics, and the SessKag romance is well-placed; prominent, but it doesn't overpower the storyline. It's very well balanced. Great job! Normally, I don't even ship SessKag, but you've got literal (ba-dump tsss) magic working for this story.

~NFC

Lord Fluff seems to have quite an unhealthy interest in female cleavages... And he's still tiny!

Kagome's speech seems a bit out of place in all the franticness. But, heh, "talking is a free action" after all...
And Sesshomaru is deadly. Even palm-sized, he's deadly.

Killing, stealing, raping and not bathing... yup, that princess sur has her priorities straight

And I get the impression that Kagome's headache will only grow worse...

Kagome's raising chaos in her wake...
And Lord Fluff has a quite complicated way to indirectly compliment others. Must make it hard to say nice things...that's probably why he doesn't say nice things much...

Ginta and Hakkaku! I love those two. What the hell are they doing in this place/story/cursed scroll ?

And that weird emperor means business... Whose bloodline is he talking about? I'm terribly curious, now...