Reviews for Afore the Dawning of the Day
sandysan2013 chapter 1 . 11/18/2017
This Jack is pragmatic and without an ounce is sympathy. I think he will kill Ianto.
FranArian chapter 1 . 2/2/2017
Wow ... that managed to paint Jack as even more of a complete bastard than RTD ever did.
Nancy Brown chapter 1 . 1/15/2010
Excellent work on this. Nicely creepy and completely plausible.
Velvet Green chapter 1 . 4/16/2009
Wow, that ending's just chilling. I like this!
heartfallen chapter 1 . 3/1/2008
Cool story concept
Hazelayes chapter 1 . 8/24/2007
This story is really impressive and moving... awesome in fact, and I don't say that word very much. The writing is sure and robust and very satisfying. It rings true... what more can I say? Thanks for a great read. :-)
talkingtothesky chapter 1 . 8/5/2007
Oh, that's really good. I kinda feel sorry for Ianto, though, he's about to lose the love of his life and his job in the same morning. Extremely well written, well done!
account1234 chapter 1 . 8/5/2007

This is really good!

I too was wondering what might have happened if Someone found Lisa before the DR got their, It's nice to see it written down ) well done!