|Reviews for Black lines on white paper|
| Haruhi-Sakura13 chapter 1 . 4/26/2008
Wonderful writing. Really excellent. You deffinitly captured George's personality. Ah, I love Paradise Kiss. Except I was crying my eyes out on the last episode. But anyways, amazing, wonderful and all those other great adjectives! Your writing is absolutely amazing!
| Andrew Knickerbocker chapter 1 . 1/9/2008
i think this was very well writen, it left me wanting more, please when you write more send it to me! I wish to continue following your writings on "Black lines on White Paper"
| Lady Samantha Riddle chapter 1 . 9/28/2007
very nice, i can actually see that... good work!
| The Mr. President chapter 1 . 9/2/2007
Method ! : Using maths to solve all your problems
Pick a number, any number. Times it by fourteen. Add 59. Take away one hundred and 3. Divide it by 3. Add 29. Times it togther with the square root of the number you started with... Now try and tell me that didn't solve all your problems (Ok, so it probably didnt.)
| onzeh11 chapter 1 . 8/21/2007
Simply briliant! I found it very amusing. You were able to capture George's personality! Fantastic job!
| Miss. Miyazawa chapter 1 . 8/7/2007
George was perfectly IC and you got the epitome of the game he plays with Yukari down pat. Pairing that with the descriptions, you did an excellent job. _