|Reviews for Gimme Mah Chocolate, Foo!|
| 1412 karasu chapter 4 . 12/17/2011
'I wonder what she meant by, "the bell rang, and you didn't come."
Anyways, I love A, and officially do not like him much because of this. . I hope you come back eventually. :)
| Shu of the Wind chapter 1 . 3/28/2011
I was laughing so hard I nearly fell off my chair.
| NonExistente chapter 5 . 2/6/2011
*dies laughing* I can't believe you wrote this chapter! Hilarious!
| grimdarkcinnamon chapter 1 . 8/7/2010
alright, i just read the first chapter. i'm nearly SOBBING with laughter. i LOVE you.
| angeltrap chapter 5 . 2/27/2010
OH MY GOD I don't think I've ever laughed this much at a Death Note fic :D And this is the first time I comment on a single chapter in the middle of a story, too, but I thought this definitely deserved it. Death Note and FFVII are my two latest and current most cherished fandoms, and this parody toyed with both of them so nicely and cleverly that I wouldn't have believed it possible before.
Loved the character stats (fkajlkfasnklfa L Aerith XD), especially the special attacks ("Healing Tea", AWW :'D), and the use of DN characters and organisations (President Demegawa almost had me spurting my tea all over my keyboard...), a sneaky Light and delightfully weird BB 3
And I totally did not laugh my head off at Watari's accent. XD I'm positive I'll never get over this: "L! L, mah boi! Dat you, son?", while picturing Watari in my mind...
On another note, the first chapter was hilarious too, the halloween chapter was somewhat magical and I adore the implication of Ryuk there, and I absolutely loved the two chappies on A and B. I've never been into stories about A, but I really liked how you portrayed her and her relationship with B, and I think you succeeded extremely well in writing a B who's clearly insane but is blissfully ignorant of the fact himself.
If you feel like continuing the epic Kira Fantasy adventures, I'd me more than eager to read! :D
| Free of Mundane Thoughts chapter 8 . 1/4/2010
...Ouch. That was a tough moral... ; And that really was gruesome! Jeez! Poor babies... that's so discouraging... I mean, A saves them with a foresight just so they can die in more misery? What kind of survival is that? Ugh.
But it was wonderfully written. Thank you for making this story. Not everything is fluff, and it's nice to read some differently oriented fanfics, too.
| MyColdHeart chapter 8 . 11/30/2009
I think I'm going to go cry now.
| ran-chan chapter 8 . 8/24/2009
I really love these stories, they are really well written and creative! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
| whitelanc3r chapter 8 . 8/9/2009
Ah, not again!
... All dead.
It was suppose to be fun, yet the ending said otherwise. Nonetheless, it was a great story still. Good one it is.
| Chocolate Flavoured Robots chapter 8 . 8/7/2009
Yeah, so I am NEVER going to get on a Roller Coaster...
Or a carnival...
THIS WAS SCARY. YOU'RE GOOD AT WRITING SCARY.. AND ANGSTY.
| Sarimia chapter 8 . 8/3/2009
Holy shit, you're amazing at the gruesome death thing.
...I'm shaking. I'm scared everyone around me is going to die now...
| The Amazing Wonder Ninja chapter 8 . 8/3/2009
oh my god that was so sad! i'm going to have nightmares! i loved it! it was so beautifully written, and everything went so smoothly even though everyone was dying...*sniff*
| Lawlietfangirl chapter 8 . 8/3/2009
this was angsty
so terrible i couldnt even cry
not know whether they were going to evade death and suddenly all dying in the end
im going to have nightmares...but i loved it
| Bemused Writer chapter 8 . 8/2/2009
Call me crazy, but I didn't realize this was based off Final Destination until I started reading this chapter. XD Which is pretty sad considering the names of the chapters...
Anyway, I thought this was artfully drawn out. I felt terrible for Near and Mello particularly, though the way you portrayed A's final scene was wonderfully tragic (in my mind, at least).
I haven't seen the third Final Destination, so now I'm kind of curious...
Finally, I enjoyed the fast paced storyline and how character development was still maintained.
| Bemused Writer chapter 7 . 7/28/2009
I'm finding this extremely interesting; since I've enjoyed pretty much all the stories on this, I guess that isn't a surprise.
One thing I like is all the history you're including for the Wammy kids. I find it interesting that you had A be a girl (or was she always? I haven't read Another Note, yet). L was great in this, his mannerisms were perfect. I think your choice when it comes to their setting, the carnival, was a good one since it made it unique and added a bit of flair to the general story.
So, I can't wait to see more. :) Great work.