Reviews for Fruit Juice
Bunnylass chapter 4 . 8/10/2007
Lol, your 5 year old cousin did that? That is scary! Ha ha.

That was really good. Typical big brother protectivness! I have 3 and their all a pain lol.

I can't wait till he proposes, hope you can update soon :)

I love a good snow-ball fight!
awishaway chapter 4 . 8/10/2007
Loved it! Post more soon
i.m. nell chapter 3 . 8/9/2007
Sweet!
BettyHall223 chapter 3 . 8/9/2007
You made me laugh with "I'm dead." Can't wait to see Jacob's reaction.
Bekki chapter 3 . 8/9/2007
Ack! *jumps* I love this! It's so fluffy and terrifc...fluffific even!
ARomanticAtHeart chapter 3 . 8/9/2007
your writing is just getting better and better!..

Giggleworthy & fluffy as expected -

Poor Jack, always thinking he's going to get into trouble with Jacob! - He won't kill him, he secretly wants Jack and Sam together anyway.

Once again, well done.!
awishaway chapter 3 . 8/9/2007
lOVED IT CAN'T WAIT TO READ THE NEXT CHAPTER. WELL DONE.
ALIMOO1971 chapter 3 . 8/9/2007
poor Jack between Mark and Jacob i think he rather face the system lords and jaffa than them, lol more soon please
VisualIDentificationZeta chapter 3 . 8/9/2007
I agree, family, being a true mother/father is more important than some rank.

poor Jack.

loved this part.
Beka Alcott chapter 3 . 8/9/2007
Woah, can't wait to see Jacob and Mark's reactions! Cool story.

Beka
iges2u chapter 3 . 8/9/2007
Sweet story so far. I think it could go with more than only two chapters though. Like to read more!
7 League Boots chapter 3 . 8/9/2007
Loved this chapter of happy tears and plain ol' happiness. LOL to Daniel's surprise, and sappy smile at their being "wrapped in Daniel." Feel goody read. More soon, please.
froggy0319 chapter 3 . 8/9/2007
LOL! Dead is right ;) Cannot wait to see Jacob and his reaction. Another wonderful chapter that of course had me drooling on the old keyboard with the description of Jack in just jeans...sigh :)
Bunnylass chapter 3 . 8/9/2007
Lol, thanks for updating, i loved Daniel's reaction. It was brilliant.

Hope you can update soon, i look forward to reading Jacob reaction, and seeing how Mark and Jack get one! :)
gater62 chapter 3 . 8/9/2007
Very,very fluffy! This was a very sweet chapter!
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