Reviews for The Sensual Captain
Thedoctorshope900 chapter 1 . 10/28/2007
That was an amazingly good story. Very amusing and very funny. Anymore? or is this it? Really well done! Good job!
TheAlternative chapter 1 . 10/14/2007
Come on! You can't leave it there! Get your but to and finish this bad baby! Please?
izzfrogger chapter 1 . 8/8/2007
LOL! Great one-shot. Very jack, though I think owen would be a bit freaked out :P
quaint-little-categories chapter 1 . 8/6/2007
Ok, Serious side first-

The gramma needs a LOAD of work. Perhaps get a betta.

Characters are written beautifull. Don't forget spacing.

Ok, not so serious side-

OMFG! That's hilarious!

"You know Jack", she said, giggling. "I could make a fortune with a sexual harassment suit".

I LOVE that!

You have some of the best one liners in here!

So, my idea- work on your gramma and setting out then get to writting some more comedys!

Cheers, Kazza xoxo
Reefgirl chapter 1 . 8/6/2007
Hee hee hee, I loved it it had me giggling for ages