Reviews for Last Request
Hope chapter 1 . 11/7
Your right, drako and hermionie would make a great couple but, this fan fic is not very good.
couldbebetter chapter 1 . 4/12
Make it minter
Theatre chapter 1 . 2/21
While I think that this story has a great idea, for it to be truly great you need to work on your grammar. For instance, quotation marks instead of bold, and spell checking yourself. Such simple things will make this story even better.
Guest chapter 1 . 12/29/2014
Anna c chapter 1 . 7/12/2014
well short for my liking but it caught my attention
dave chapter 1 . 6/25/2014
can u plz delete this story?It is possibly one of the shittiest I have read a few books to enhance your writing skills
Guest chapter 1 . 6/8/2014
Sounds like it was written by a 10 year old…
Guest chapter 1 . 2/3/2014
I hated it
Anon chapter 1 . 2/3/2014
This fan fiction is terrible, have you ever heard of grammar or spell check? And really "the war is looming" could it get any worse? Oh wait it does it turns into the cliche romance story and like twilight, you the author, failed miserably.
yasmine chapter 1 . 1/15/2014
oooh :o
Someone chapter 1 . 10/8/2013
Nice job!
meh woman chapter 1 . 8/1/2013
Dazzelmebitch chapter 1 . 6/12/2013
It is too short
Dramione rocks chapter 1 . 3/25/2013
I loved it but u should make it longer
Guest chapter 1 . 3/15/2013
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