Reviews for Terror at the net
Guest chapter 6 . 11/22/2016
Ryoma should be 20 the jail sentence was 10 years and the guy was in for 8 and since in this story ryoma is 16 he would have been 8 in the prequel and I believe ryoma is at least 11or 12 in the anime
abandonedchannel chapter 10 . 12/12/2014
Oh my gosh I can just imagine credits rolling now XD with some awesome ending music...

I never thoughts I'd say this, but...

I think that this sequel surpassed the first fic! O.O And I REALLY wasn't expecting that because the first one was amazing! But this was like amazing times infinity! :D

However, I was slightly confused with the ages. Ryoma was 12 when he was first assaulted by Akutsu, right? And then Akutsu had a ten year sentence. However, In the beginning of the story, you said he had two years of his sentence left (If I'm not mistaken). That would mean 8 years passed, making Ryoma 20. But in this fic he was 16? Did I miss something? Or did I read something incorrectly? XD

Great job! No, great can't even begin to describe it...

Amazing, superb, fantastic, phenomenal, beautiful job perfectly done! :D
aku no tensai chapter 10 . 2/6/2012
Ahahaha~! I really did love this story and everything about it. Thank you for creating such an amazing, suspenseful, heart-clenching fanfic.

One question: Doesn't Fuji still have his cast on? That means HE'S THE BOTTOM! XD

aku no tensai chapter 2 . 2/6/2012
I was old is everyone!

And also, I LOVE THIS STORY! I'm sooooo happy that you made a sequel! XD

FireAndPowder chapter 8 . 11/23/2011
How can Fuji do all of that (climb a tree over roof and through a window) with a broken leg? Is it not actually broken?
opticfrogofinsanity chapter 10 . 7/18/2010
Wait wait wait! So who got bottom? xD I loved the sequal! It was so interesting and held my attention the entire time, I loved it! Keep writing!
xSakuraBlossom chapter 10 . 6/26/2010
This was a great sequel. Just a few small things (sorry, I'm kind of picky...)

1. Akutsu Yuuki is Akutsu's mother. The name you're looking for is Akutsu Jin.

2. Maybe it's just me, but Sakuno seems a tad OOC. She seems bit too talkative and she's a lot less shy around Ryoma than she normally is.

Other than that, this was extremely well written. I really enjoyed reading it, and I loved the suspense.

Great job, keep writing~
LittleKuroNeko-nyan chapter 10 . 6/9/2010
His name isn't Akutsu Yuuki. Its Akutsu Jin/Gin. He was a troubled kid who enjoyed picking fights with other kids, some older, and was a childhood friend, kinda, to Kawamura Takashi, also known as Taka~san by everyone else.

You might not have finished the series or anything, but Akutsu was really early on, in like the first 20 episodes I believe and if your watching the english version then he's already appeared and it doesn't say that his name is Yuuki. Take it from your sempai of knowledge of this show since I have finished all 178 episodes twice, plus the additional 26 episodes of the sequel that involve the National tournament against Rikkaidai in which Yukimora Seiichi plays a match against Echizen Ryoma to determine which team, Seigaku or Rikkaidai, wins the National Tournament.
Herbblood chapter 10 . 2/14/2010
really cute ending!
SilverHaraki chapter 10 . 2/10/2010
Yea Akutsu got what he deserved! Almost killing Tezuka T~T Love this sequel :) two thumbs up
Kain Sinner chapter 10 . 12/19/2009
Well done and it kept me in it's grip just like the first one.

Hehe, could u please write a eijiryo story? There aren't many around and you're one of the best writers I've found

If that's fine with u if course


Kuroki-Ryomi chapter 10 . 3/18/2009
This was so awesome! Thanks for the story!
HiDiNgFrOmYoU chapter 10 . 8/26/2008

Um you are a good writer... you made Nanjiro probably the most self centered stuck up head-nin-the-sand parent int he anime univers and I really ahted that but otehrwise awesome job although I think you handled the suicide attempt wrong I think Fuji should have reacted differently but hey thats me. GOOD JOB!
Andramir Armenienton chapter 10 . 8/6/2008
O! Another rather good story from you! You're right, the first was better, but I liked this one too.

I have but one question... Wasn't Ryoma 12 years old in the 1st? And wasn't Akutsu sentenced to 10 (ten) years? In that case, if he was let out 2 (two) years before, he would still be in for 8 years, and that means Ryoma would have been 20 years old in this story... Anyway, Seigaku is a JUNIOR high school, and in the anime, Fuji and Tezuka and co. already are in their graduating year, at the age of 14, so when older than 14, they would be going to another school... But I liked the story - it was actually quite good, and I always see the unimportant details in everything I do, and I hope you don't get offended by my review...

Oh, and one funny little fact: Did you know that the Japanese word "Aku" means evil? In other words, AKUtsu has a very fitting name...
Jaricchi chapter 10 . 5/31/2008

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