|Reviews for Intoxicated|
| hardcorechecker chapter 1 . 8/28/2008
oh my god! love it love it love it! great perspective, very realistic. D
| Casey Stardust chapter 1 . 8/25/2008
wow, that was really well done! :)
I wouldnt be surprised if it is quite very similar in midnight sun!
| Mystery1894 chapter 1 . 8/17/2008
That was god
| 123iluvzac chapter 1 . 7/21/2008
| Droplets of Salt chapter 1 . 7/12/2008
A great one-shot! I loved it!
| Make A Shadow chapter 1 . 7/8/2008
Once again, a beautiful fic.
Yes, something out or Midnight Sun.
I wouldn't it.
It's just the way that you wrote the descriptions and the imagery through Edward's eyes, though it's the same scenario that Bella dealt with are woven so beautifully.
| acirelemagne chapter 1 . 7/6/2008
That was really good! I think that is very accurate!
| melissaturkey chapter 1 . 7/5/2008
this was amazing!
i really like this. edward dwells on her blood, her scent, his thirst and hunger just enough while his love was equally potent! very well done!
this is how i imagine edward's internal voice though SM says that edward carries a bit more angst around in his head...but i like the light note he carries in this particular part of the book! so you definately touched that!
totally favoriting this!
| Irish Froggy chapter 1 . 7/1/2008
That was incredibly well done. I've seen so many things from Edward's point of view, but you did it very well. Are you Stephenie Meyer in disguise? Seriously. I wouldn't be surprised. That would explain all the references to conversations with Tanya...which were never published, at least, not that I know of.
Did you do a story with Tanya in it, where he goes to talk to her during "Twilight"? I don't think I've read any of your other stories, but I intend to! For a oneshot, that was amazing!
| Peregrinate chapter 1 . 6/27/2008
| thedownbeat chapter 1 . 6/9/2008
That's so cute! I love it!
| humbleteacher chapter 1 . 6/8/2008
This is just beautiful prose. I can really imagine this actually coming from the pen of Stephenie herself. Excellent.
| mybrandofheroin1 chapter 1 . 6/7/2008
that was amazing.
i loved all the emotion in it.
| Jude'sxUniverse chapter 1 . 6/4/2008
That was fantastic! U r an amazing writer! lol!
U ROck! ]
| lil.angel.on.earth chapter 1 . 6/4/2008
*applauds to a great writer*