Reviews for A moment of vulnerability
ImDiffrentSoWhat chapter 1 . 9/24/2011
...One of the best NnyXDevi stories I've ever read. It's incrediable. So in charater yet so romantic.
reddog f.13 chapter 1 . 6/24/2009
aw! i wanted it to go on and you should its so cool! :)
xcorezombie chapter 1 . 10/5/2007
I strongly believe you should continue on this.

i know its a one shot, but I think it could just go on...

it has a lot of potential, and it was ended kind of...abrubtly.

so will you please...just consider trying to extend it, please?

because I think it was really great, and could continue!

great story overall! loved it.
Makes it worse chapter 1 . 8/27/2007
Intriguing. This shows a side of Nny that we don't see very often. Probably because he doesn't want to feel that way.

My suggestions: Avoid bolding or underlining sentences in a story. This isn't necessary, it just distracts readers from the story, or so I believe. I've also noticed that some of the sentences are too long. A sentence shouldn't have over three commas in it. They should be separated into separate ones. Other than that, it's not bad.

- Dirrick
HappilyInsaneSuicide chapter 1 . 8/11/2007
Aw... beautifully emotional! :)