Reviews for The Story in the Soil
lizard3731 chapter 2 . 7/12/2014
I like your story so far, but it bugs me that you put apostrophes in words that are plural. If you mean more than one of something, you don't need an apostrophe. Just add an S. E.g.: crowds, traitors, death eaters.
Guest chapter 23 . 1/12/2014
gosh, love this fic! it was very different and you are a great writer! liked the ending, everything is good with me unless some og them die or they don't ens up together.. anyways, again, loved it!
erinelle chapter 23 . 10/9/2012
I am a fan of the happy ending, but I enjoyed this story nonetheless :)
janjan2009 chapter 5 . 8/23/2011
wow lol
janjan2009 chapter 1 . 8/23/2011
Poor Luna but, lol to the boy's banter
CheshireCat23 chapter 23 . 6/5/2011
The story was quite dark, but still cool.
Seeker Zenn chapter 2 . 8/25/2009
im aliking this muchly.
gitgit chapter 23 . 6/12/2008
excellent

i actually liked the ending alot

great work

and now im going to your profile to read some next story you have posted :D great work though really enjoyed that little letter to his mother
gitgit chapter 22 . 6/12/2008
hahahah i loved how she randomly appeared at the doorway and i can see what you mean it does sound painful writing about those damn doorways doesnt it

interesting i wonder what they are going to do no w

are they going to take down the lord fart?
gitgit chapter 21 . 6/12/2008
OH dang that was awesome

excellent chapter

now that blaise has been found otu this is getting intense
gitgit chapter 20 . 6/12/2008
WAit WHAT

i thought blaise was good!

oh man

um

kay

lol nice chapter :D
gitgit chapter 19 . 6/12/2008
so now who has just entered the room

oh man that was really exciting great work with the chapter at the moment i like blaise and vicky lets hope it stays that way heheh
gitgit chapter 18 . 6/12/2008
the resistance eh

interesting

ahahaha and lucius stunned interesting
gitgit chapter 17 . 6/12/2008
nice chapter i liked the little conversation hermione and draco had that was awesome and hmm thats interesting how can draco forget :S something going on?

and i wonder who found them in such a comprimising position
gitgit chapter 16 . 6/12/2008
interesting very interesting i wonder wats going on too
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