|Reviews for Semitone|
| Anazarel chapter 1 . 8/28/2009
poor, poor Edward...
| Dr. Fang's Girl chapter 1 . 8/18/2009
i liked it!
| mrs.pattinson chapter 1 . 8/3/2009
I thought it was a little boring compared to all of your other stories. :(
| Thata chapter 1 . 4/14/2009
Hi, there, again!
Oh, this is so fluffy!
Do you intend to do another chapter? I do really hope so, I would LOVE to read what's up next, or, even if it was just an one-shot, please write this one again in Edward's POV!
Lots of kisses from Brazil
| Rococo-Bang chapter 1 . 4/11/2009
aw. why doesnt she just say yes!
anyway, good story, Your a great writer
| Twilightluver.Cullen.Obsessed chapter 1 . 3/26/2009
this story is amazing you have it just right cant wait for the next chapter
| xoxocullenluverxoxo chapter 1 . 3/14/2009
poor edward...its a good thing he knows she will say yes eventualy
| xFeathersxx chapter 1 . 2/7/2009
Adorable. I think you really have the chracters nailed. But a failed proposal isn't exactly a happy ending, though it might not exactly be what you're going for (sigh...poor Edward. I love him so much and Bella can be soo thick.)
More! More more more! Please!
| TwilightJemS chapter 1 . 1/18/2009
That is a beautiful story!
| Chrystal Cleare chapter 1 . 12/28/2008
This is a really good story. I hope that you might write more to it. It kinda is a large hangover.
| Infame chapter 1 . 12/26/2008
Aw, so cute and romantic, I loved Edward's sneakiness! Thanks for posting!
| luv-edward cullen-forever chapter 1 . 12/25/2008
the fanfic was awsome i just wish bella would say yes if it were me i would say yes in a heartbeat-i mean come on its EDWARD CULLEN what is wrong with her? anyways merry xmas :Pgreay story
| coffee.mango chapter 1 . 11/30/2008
edwarad's such a sweetie :)
| InLuvWithFictionalCharacters chapter 1 . 11/29/2008
This is so adorable! You are a beautiful writer.
| BleedingxHearts chapter 1 . 11/19/2008
.more more more!