Reviews for Fall of the Republic
Hanzo of the Salamander 2.0 chapter 10 . 9/13/2011
I look forward to reading what happens next in your story
Harry2 chapter 10 . 8/19/2007
Well, first contact has been made with some of the groups. Now, lets see who the newly called Slayer is, since Buffy did die for a few minutes.
Harry2 chapter 9 . 8/17/2007
It sounds like their is about to be a major fight breaking out in Cleveland! We have the forces of light, represented by Faith and her Watcher, Jenny and Giles, and SG-1 on a recruitment drive, while the Military, the police and the Assassins sent by the Watchers Council want to either saction Wesley and/or Buffy as well! Now, let the battle commence!
Harry2 chapter 8 . 8/15/2007
Well, it looks like both groups are on the move towards Cleveland. There, the slayer lives, and both groups want her. The Darkness wants to control her, the light wants her as an ally. The question is, which group will get there first, and which side will win.
Harry2 chapter 7 . 8/13/2007
Sounds like Horry may be just the extra help the resistance needs in the fight against Xander/Darth Mortalis. And, be careful what you wish for! While this technology may be a great aid in fighting the Gou'ld, there will be a high price to pay for getting and using it, if you get it form Darth Mortalis.
Harry2 chapter 6 . 8/12/2007
YES! G-Man is back, and Jenny's love is back as well! Now to hurry to Cleveland and try and reach Wesley, Buffy, Dawn and Joyce before they go on the road, or Xander decides to come after them!
Harry2 chapter 5 . 8/11/2007
Well, it sounds like Buffy has as good a relationship with Wesley as she did with Giles. And Wesley knows how to surf the web? THE HORROR OF IT! (LOL!) But, in all seriousness, its time that, as soon as Joyce is able to travel, if she can, the quartet needs to high tail it! Between the Council and Xander, things are not looking up for the forces of light.
Harry2 chapter 4 . 8/9/2007
Oh dear! Sounds like Faith and her watcher are in DEEP kimchee! They had better hope that help is found and soon to bust them out, before Xander tries to turn Faith to the Dark Side!
Harry2 chapter 3 . 8/9/2007
Well, it looks like Giles has finished his training. He is now a Jedi. Time to return to Earth, and start taking down Xander's dark army!
Harry2 chapter 2 . 8/8/2007
And so it begins! Xander may have suceeded in controling America, but the rebellion is growing! Giles is about ready to take the Jedi Trials, and the rebels on earth have found Buffy. Now, as for the Council *Takes shotgun and exectutes Travers!* TRAVERS YOU BULLOCKS! You think that having a traditional Slayer and Watcher is going to make a differnece? WRONG! This is a time for thinking outside the box, you dolt! You better wise up before the Sith come after YOU with the aid of the First Evil!
snowecat chapter 2 . 8/8/2007
Cool. Giles a Jedi, that's just wild. Can't wait to see what you do next.
Mountain King chapter 2 . 8/8/2007
I'm surprised that this hasn't gotten any more reviews than it has so far. It seems to be a great little story that has big scope. That said there are problems.

For instance Giles as Jedi. Thats a convoluted plot twist that, I'm afraid, just doesn't sit with his charictor. Giles is far more Sith than Jedi, being willing to kill and the whole Ripper past is the Dark Side. No matter how you slice it Yoda would not go back on his "Once you have started down the dark path..." speach. I could go into detail but the fact it that that alone is the massive hole in the middle of your story.

As a homage to The Dark Scribbler's atounding work, yes this is good. On it's own no and that is what needs improveing

Mountain King
Harry2 chapter 1 . 8/6/2007
LORDS OF LIGHT! What a tale! And I can hardly wait to read more chapters of it! Its a rich tale that has many twists and turns that I am looking forward to. Especially if and when Faith shows up! I wonder if she will be working for Darth Mortalis or for Jenny and her group, which looks like will be getting Giles back soon!