|Reviews for For the Glory of Pharoah|
| HonestLiar33 chapter 1 . 11/4/2010
Omg the 2nd part was compleated on my birthday! O.o
lol just had to point that out :3
| asdef chapter 1 . 2/15/2009
Okay, I'm confused. Is Mahado human or the Dark Magician in this fic? And if the latter, how is Atem talking to him and getting answers back? Isn't the Dark Magician a paper card or something? Well, anyway, I don't want to see this fic end unhappily. I have an idea for you. You're fully entitled to reject this idea if you want, I'm just making a suggestion in case you wanted it. How about Atem gets kidnapped and Bakura and Mahado have to band together to help him? If Mahado's a card in this story, then you can make Bakura put him in his deck. Then you can make a duel happen between Bakura and the kidnapper, with Atem's freedom on the line (since they use dueling to solve every problem in this show). Then Bakura uses Dark Magician to win. If Mahado's a human here, then they can just beat the kidnapper together in a normal, human way. So then Atem is freed, and Bakura and Mahado realize that they can tolerate each other after all. A truce is called, and everyone's happy. Again, you are free to reject this idea if you want. Or you can use it. The choice is up to you.
| johnnyd2 chapter 1 . 10/11/2008
Aw... Very sad story. I feel for Mahaado X_X.
| FlouncingWish chapter 1 . 8/9/2008
urm... Can I guess that mahado and Yami were ince together in the past but because Y ami lost his memories, he can't remember? That's why Mahado is so sad isn't it?
| Cr4ZyFr0G100 chapter 1 . 11/27/2007
...Aw my god... Can you write one with a happier ending, like bakura dies and dm and atem are happy? God i wanna cry...
| kawaiilileevee chapter 1 . 10/22/2007
;.; So sad...