Reviews for He was still warm, still smiling
Raven9260 chapter 1 . 6/16/2011
I love it and I totally agree with you, it's cruel to let just one of the twins die, and I also liked the part where George felt actual pain when his brother died, it shows the deep bond they have/had.
SomedayEngland chapter 1 . 11/25/2007
I like that bit about George feeling actual pain when Fred died. It was scary seeing George use "crucio" on someone. Especially Draco! I like the idea of this tory, but do you want a bit of advice? Separate it into paragraphs so it is easier to read. :)
coconut13 chapter 1 . 8/6/2007
I agree with EVERYTHING you said in your author's note; if any Weasley were to die, I would think it would be Ron, not Fred. He got gypped out of a decent death scene (BOOM! Oh no Fred is dead, AH) and Tonks and Lupin's deaths weren't even explained, for all we know they could have died of food poisoning.

Anyway, good job, I think your story definitely illustrated what a lot of people were thinking when they finished the book.