Reviews for Darkness Approaching
xpadfootprongsx chapter 13 . 3/21/2009
aks100 you should definelty finish this story, it is quite good. Keep up with the great stories... You should also do more, stories, involving april and jenny...

thank you

xpadfootprongsx
Le26199 chapter 13 . 8/23/2008
Hey I just read this story its really good. please please keep going...?
GreatMouseDetective chapter 13 . 6/4/2008
I really like your story...you should update soon! :D
EnglishGrlVerity chapter 13 . 5/16/2008
...Interesting story. 8 people, wow, that's a good few.
shetlandlace chapter 13 . 5/14/2008
This chapter was excellent-the end of it was really stark & amazing-the true sign of war: when your friends & loved ones are victims. Sad..it's good to see some real serious exploration of the first Wizard's War.
Skippy Agogo chapter 13 . 5/14/2008
Interesting tale, one anachronism; Uptown Girl by Billy Joel was released in 1983.
shetlandlace chapter 12 . 5/12/2008
Very intense chapter! Well done
Broken Gold chapter 12 . 5/12/2008
PETUNIA! EURGH!

Really good job.
Broken Gold chapter 11 . 3/5/2008
lol. james fish
aptteach123 chapter 11 . 2/22/2008
WOW! Great chapter! I loved it a lot, keep up the awesome work and please try to update again soon! I can't wait to see what happens next!
padfoot prongs chapter 11 . 2/19/2008
“Lily, go out with me?” He asked her for what seemed like the billionth time in his life.

“Alright,” She said with a grin. She kissed him again but James pushed her away.

“What?” He asked.

“I said alright,” She said with a smile. James was speechless. He was expecting the answer but it was still a shock when it came, “Don’t look so surprised.

aw so sweet

i liked this chapter...so nice and mush mush!

grt job like always and aww her parents r nice..

i like the cute magic she did...
shetlandlace chapter 11 . 2/18/2008
Very good chapter, loved Lily's play at the beginning. James is such a sweetie.
padfoot prongs chapter 10 . 2/16/2008
aw can i just say i wanna cry? the sweetness in that chapter

damn james is so nice and u rite this so well

its very late and im tired yet i still enjoyed it immensly

thnx for an update and cant wait for more
padfoot prongs chapter 9 . 2/16/2008
hey anna love, its moi ur inspiration hahaah

lol i wasnt sure if i reviewed this so here i am again after rereading the end of the chappie again

good job and i really like how the relatoinship bet. james and lily is going and how james got worried about lily and how siri asked about hiba...

grt job keep it up :D
shetlandlace chapter 10 . 2/16/2008
I just found this story & devoured all 10 chapters at once. When I do that, I only review after the last chapter I read. This is an excellent story. You do a great job of portraying what the first war must have been like. Can't wait for more...
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