|Reviews for Darkness Approaching|
| xpadfootprongsx chapter 13 . 3/21/2009
aks100 you should definelty finish this story, it is quite good. Keep up with the great stories... You should also do more, stories, involving april and jenny...
| Le26199 chapter 13 . 8/23/2008
Hey I just read this story its really good. please please keep going...?
| GreatMouseDetective chapter 13 . 6/4/2008
I really like your story...you should update soon! :D
| EnglishGrlVerity chapter 13 . 5/16/2008
...Interesting story. 8 people, wow, that's a good few.
| shetlandlace chapter 13 . 5/14/2008
This chapter was excellent-the end of it was really stark & amazing-the true sign of war: when your friends & loved ones are victims. Sad..it's good to see some real serious exploration of the first Wizard's War.
| Skippy Agogo chapter 13 . 5/14/2008
Interesting tale, one anachronism; Uptown Girl by Billy Joel was released in 1983.
| shetlandlace chapter 12 . 5/12/2008
Very intense chapter! Well done
| Broken Gold chapter 12 . 5/12/2008
Really good job.
| Broken Gold chapter 11 . 3/5/2008
lol. james fish
| aptteach123 chapter 11 . 2/22/2008
WOW! Great chapter! I loved it a lot, keep up the awesome work and please try to update again soon! I can't wait to see what happens next!
| padfoot prongs chapter 11 . 2/19/2008
“Lily, go out with me?” He asked her for what seemed like the billionth time in his life.
“Alright,” She said with a grin. She kissed him again but James pushed her away.
“What?” He asked.
“I said alright,” She said with a smile. James was speechless. He was expecting the answer but it was still a shock when it came, “Don’t look so surprised.
aw so sweet
i liked this chapter...so nice and mush mush!
grt job like always and aww her parents r nice..
i like the cute magic she did...
| shetlandlace chapter 11 . 2/18/2008
Very good chapter, loved Lily's play at the beginning. James is such a sweetie.
| padfoot prongs chapter 10 . 2/16/2008
aw can i just say i wanna cry? the sweetness in that chapter
damn james is so nice and u rite this so well
its very late and im tired yet i still enjoyed it immensly
thnx for an update and cant wait for more
| padfoot prongs chapter 9 . 2/16/2008
hey anna love, its moi ur inspiration hahaah
lol i wasnt sure if i reviewed this so here i am again after rereading the end of the chappie again
good job and i really like how the relatoinship bet. james and lily is going and how james got worried about lily and how siri asked about hiba...
grt job keep it up :D
| shetlandlace chapter 10 . 2/16/2008
I just found this story & devoured all 10 chapters at once. When I do that, I only review after the last chapter I read. This is an excellent story. You do a great job of portraying what the first war must have been like. Can't wait for more...