|Reviews for Play With Fire|
| Ellie CameronDB chapter 8 . 8/18/2007
Wow, this is really good. I can't wait to see what happens next. I hope you update soon!
| funnechick chapter 8 . 8/15/2007
Can't wait for the next chapter. Jay's falling...
| sing2me091 chapter 8 . 8/14/2007
god they are both really hott!
lol i love this. post more.
| sing2me091 chapter 6 . 8/9/2007
amazing! post more.
| ESLgirl chapter 6 . 8/9/2007
I ahte good stories that are hurt by spelling and grammar mistakes. You need to find a way to run a spell check. That's at the very least. Ideally you would find a beta.
| Tammywammy chapter 6 . 8/9/2007
just keeps getting more interesting. cant wait to read what happens next.
| sarah chapter 4 . 8/8/2007
aw I love it continue please
| amaemae8 chapter 4 . 8/8/2007
Intresting... can't wait to see what happenes.
| ESLgirl chapter 1 . 8/7/2007
Your grammar is not great and your word choice can be awkward. I really wish you would find a beta.
| sing2me091 chapter 4 . 8/7/2007
| Zumiez chapter 4 . 8/7/2007
I like it.
| Tammywammy chapter 4 . 8/7/2007
sounds really interesting. cant wait to see how the plan works out.
| missy chapter 3 . 8/7/2007
Great start. i like how emma stands up to jay. update soon.