|Reviews for Ocean Sky|
| PagingDoctor502 chapter 1 . 3/20/2008
That was so sad! I'm literally crying, and you just made a great feat cause I usually don't cry. That was just tear-jerking. I have to say all of the things said and the actions were very vivid. It was so easy to picture everyone doing those things. What great Kataangst.
| Peaceful Dragon Rose chapter 1 . 1/12/2008
| The Mad shoe1 chapter 1 . 12/26/2007
| hyperactivefreak chapter 1 . 8/10/2007
awesome jon dude!
| DuHSPaZZiNGFeL chapter 1 . 8/8/2007
Beautiful! This made me cry! Wow. I read both oneshots and I thought both were so well written. Your descriptions really amaze me. The only thing that got me in a sort of ranting heap was the ever so short bit of what seemed to be Zutara...even though I knew perfectly well, it wasn't. lol. It's a Kataangian habit I guess. XD
Oh and, by the way...if I never told you this, my old penname used to be ElicityFay.
| smc1214 chapter 1 . 8/8/2007
This made me want to lock myself in a room and cry, but in a good way! I am in the middle of sobs,but I don't care! This has to be one of the best stories I have ever read for it is romantic, and tragic at the same time. Beautifully written, absolutely love it.
| Writer for the Tylwyth Teg chapter 1 . 8/8/2007
Aw, that was so nice! Bittersweet, but nice. Now you should do a story from Aang's point of view, like what the spirit world was like when he first got there and stuff. Just a suggestion, because I love your stuff. See ya!
| SaraHeartsKataang chapter 1 . 8/8/2007
omg that was really good.
you had me crying. lol.
i felt so bad for katara
| libowie chapter 1 . 8/7/2007
This was so awesome it's left my head spinning! Ack- I can't even type straight!
I'm not sure if i like this better than HatEoAT, but it's definatley a rival. I loved the begining, God has given you a way with words, my friend, and they flow better than nearly anything i've ever read. You also have a way of making me feel as though i'm THERE, instead of sitting on my new round bed under a simple picture of the icebergs i one day hope to see one day.
This was oh-so-breath-taking, and the only time i can ever remember actually sort of wanting Katara to end up with Zuko, for his sake. I think the Zuko and Katara relationship is sweet, as long as they're just real good friends.
You should really write more, you can take a simple story-line and turn it into somthing amazing!
A lovely begining, middle, and end to what may be one of the most impacting one-shot collections on this site! :)