Reviews for Pawns in the Game |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I couldn’t resist reading this as soon as id finished the sequel. I had been looking through doctor who fics when I found your other story so I read them in the wrong way but they were great none the less. ive always loved the idea of rose working with jack at torchwood. brilliant story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() An interesting story. Heading to read your sequel now. |
![]() ![]() Rose is so irritatingly useless in this story. It's the classic '2d printout' insertion, where the character who wasn't in the story originally just hangs around in the background and canon continues on without any change. Pointless. Why even bother bringing her over at all if she just holds hands and glares and fluffs uselessly about? |
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![]() ![]() Omigod write more! Awesome story. Totally cried. Good job |
![]() ![]() ![]() I ship Jack/Rose and I first started reading this on AO3 and on accident I stumbled upon it on ( which made me immensely happy becuase I use more). I love your story and the relationship between Jack/Rose. |
![]() ![]() WOAH. On Jack leaving with the Doctor, you get so many perspectives. The majority of the Janto shippers see it as abandonment, but from Jack's point of view, it's an attempt at escaping to freedom. I find that fascinating. From the way you tell it, they run reflexively toward the sound, never considering what consequences could be. That's an interesting viewpoint. You did a very good job on this. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was bloody amazing! :D Now I'm going to look if you have other stories like this. I hope you have. If you don't: PLEASE, write more! If you have: PLEASE write more! ;) This was damn exciting, and I would have been happy to read more of it. I hope there is an epilogue to this story. It's so remarkable! :D I love it! :D |
![]() ![]() Just saying I reckon it would have been cool if rose went all bad wolf on jack to speed up his resurrection process just to see the rest of their reactions! LOL |
![]() ![]() ![]() yay rose come back now all we need is the doctor! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a brilliant re-working of the episode, and you did an incredible job. I can't wait to read the next one! |
![]() ![]() Oh Golly Gosh, the minute i read the words 'Roman soldier' my whole mind screamed "RORY!" |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing story. i love how you wrote the relationship between Jack and Rose and then the subtle mentions of the Doctor. great job |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome story! When I finished it I almost yelled out "SEQUEL!" Yeah a sequel would be great, maybe you have one...I'm going to check. Loved this story :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I enjoyed this! Glad I found it. |