Reviews for The Hyde Factor
FortressMaximus chapter 2 . 8/29/2007
Humm...seems Kim has a dark side who likes to play rough. I really like the way this has started; a dash of Heroes, mixed liberally with Kim Possible and baked in a genetic zipper over until golden brown! If push comes to shove, will Ron have to fight Kim's dark half with his own? If Faye gets out of hand, the only way to stop her could be to let Zorpox come out and play...

Really fun story! I'm keeping tabs on this one for sure!
Ace Ian Combat chapter 2 . 8/28/2007
Tee hee hee, I'm loving this story so far!
SolarinStudio chapter 2 . 8/28/2007
The evil Kimmie is a bit dark. I like it. I wonder where you are going to go from here.

Some minor proofreading issues: -when a dreanged Scotsman-

should be deranged.

Otherwise, a quality piece of work.

Kudos
dr-fanmai-lover chapter 1 . 8/27/2007
bervo poetic-jaust what-about momqiue&tra&booine-aer-they

aill-raigth

remainds-me badboy-epd iam aillraigth-waith-shego
dr-fanmai-lover chapter 1 . 8/25/2007
bervo hm iam-sarting-to-think taht mission-befor maust

have-to-do faye,s-bairth-raigth faye-only-ehcoing-shego

-doing-kp now shego's-know becaerfull-what-wish-for-you

may-git sirives-shego-raigth
dr-fanmai-lover chapter 1 . 8/25/2007
bervo i woder what-team-go-ratecion-seeing see ther

saister in the

terrama-canter this pproves

monquie&tra&booine-in-dier-danger-for-faye-hyde
dr-fanmai-lover chapter 1 . 8/25/2007
bervo you-mistke wahan this saortory you -first-raigth

whan-you-sad-fir-shego-waes-afairde frast-ttime-tow
dr-fanmai-lover chapter 1 . 8/23/2007
bervo this remainds-me sapiderman,s-foe-the-leazer-or yugi-oh,s-

bakurka reammer-this-saertd shego-wanted gave-kp

pain in-eand-fya-gavein-shego-saire-pain/feel-of

-elive-kainlyexpain-kp-transfomer-into-fayhde
dr-fanmai-lover chapter 1 . 8/22/2007
bervo how-did-kp-eaned-up-fm-waithin-her

if fm-did-taht-shego-than-warroryd-about-booine

i-caer-about-booine
mkusenagi2 chapter 1 . 8/8/2007
Interesting.
AtomicFire chapter 1 . 8/8/2007
Faye Hyde? Interesting premise, kinda like the Moodulator but with more permanent consequences for Kim.

Nice idea and well written.
Silent Magi chapter 1 . 8/7/2007
Alright... you have my interest. More soon please.
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