|Reviews for The Mask of Ice|
| Cookie-the-Rookie chapter 13 . 4/29/2013
Wow. This story has gotten more and more ridiculous with every passing chapter. I'm quitting now.
| Cookie-the-Rookie chapter 6 . 4/29/2013
Damn. They just appeared and they already seem like Mary-sue's. *Sigh* I can't wait for the HitsuHina.
| Sora Tayuya chapter 15 . 12/22/2009
Pooh. I wanted Toushirou to beat up/destroy/beat to a pulp Mayuri...aw. Oh well. This is a real treat to read, did you know? This whole story is. But, like any good book(and yes, it is very close to being good enough for a book), I can only read so much at a time. So I will return for the next chatper-tomorrow. After I finish doing (ug) chores. Ja ne!
| Sora Tayuya chapter 14 . 12/22/2009
MAYURI MAYURI MAYURI. LET THE PERSON TOUSHIROU WILL BEAT THE LIVING DAYLIGHTS OUT OF BE MYUREI PLEASE!(crosses fingers, toes, then ears...very hard, and do not attempt at home)
| Sora Tayuya chapter 13 . 12/22/2009
Oh...k, nothing of real interest here. I just want more bad stuff (a.k.a. stuff involving Aizen taking Toushirou and being evil) to happen to Toushirou. That is the interesting thing. But...you are doing a smashing job of writing the rest of it up as well. (Oh jeez...I sounded british there for a sec...)
| Sora Tayuya chapter 12 . 12/22/2009
K...so the sisters are probably not evil...wow. This chapter was really, really good. Haha, every random teenager's nightmare: school. Hahahaha...Awsome. Wow, Ulquiorra almost got Toushirou very easily, but then awsome randomenss started and he didn't. I hope you didn't kill him...even Ichigo couldn't come close to killing him...even if (in your story) Toushirou is like 10x stronger than Ichigo (which will never really happen).
| Sora Tayuya chapter 11 . 12/21/2009
1. The three sisters are evil and working for Aizen
2. Toushirou is this mysterious 'key' that Uliquiorra is searching for for Aizen
3. HOLY BEEP WOW AWSOME RANDOMNESS GOING ON THERE FOR TOUSHIROU! SUGOI...
| Sora Tayuya chapter 10 . 12/21/2009
Ok, some randomness there with Koori...but I am pretty confidient that those three sisters either/or DID die that night long ago, or/and came back to life from Aizen or/and are working for Aizen because they want Toushirou to master the...hollow? inside of him. Yes, this is SOO very random, but it is my hypothesis.
| Sora Tayuya chapter 9 . 12/21/2009
Ug...I still don't like how Toushirou's 'hollow-dude' is stronger than Ichigo's. I really like Ichigo's hollow being mega freakishly strong and dangerous. I read the spoilers for the next chapter...wow. This is impressive. So Koori is really half of a twin Zampakutou thing? Sugei...
| Sora Tayuya chapter 7 . 12/21/2009
Awsome! What a hilarious chapter! This could have been straight out of the anime, it's so good!
| Sora Tayuya chapter 5 . 12/19/2009
Cool! Koori is way too powerful.
| Sora Tayuya chapter 4 . 12/18/2009
(Ichimaru smiled and shouted to Hinamori, “Eh, Hinamori-kun, got somethin’ ta’ tell ya before I go off!” Hinamori ‘hmphed’ and Ichimaru continued with a very evil grin, “Chibi taichou… says hi.”
“Ah?” Hinamori gasped. “S-Shirou-chan…”
“Too bad ya can’t come with me, Hinamori-kun. Aizen-sama misses ya, and so does the chibi taichou,” Ichimaru said before he got sucked into the dimensional rip and disappeared for good.
Hinamori broke down and cried.)
That is perfect. Just like the anime. Very well done. The scene with Yamamoto-totaichou is a little unusual, but ok. I just personally don't think that the division one commander would say that. He also may think that Hitsugaya joined the enemy. He never mentioned it. Also, Byakuga stood up for Toushirou? That's a first. I like it. Last thing. Zaraki wouldn't think that hard. He'd probably not care, maybe insult Toushirou a bit, but not do into that largeish detail about his sword. He really doesn't care about that. This was a good chapter. OMG he let out his hollow- (I think that it is his brother...ish...I bet that they were twins, then the brother died before birth, and kinda turned into a hollow inside of his twin brother, random, but acceptable).
| Sora Tayuya chapter 3 . 12/18/2009
...ok...I don't get it. So...Koori is...unknown? So confusing...ned...more...torture...or...action...or...
| Sora Tayuya chapter 2 . 12/18/2009
Yay! You use romanji japanese! I can read it, luckily, so yay for me! It is so much more fun that way. Also, are you studing japanese? If so, what are you studing? Are you in japan right now? Are you learning the language? Or do you already know it? I do like that you hate the dub too. I stayed up til 1:00am to watch americanized Bleach, saw 5 minutes of episode 100, and promply passed out. When I woke up (like 10 seconds later) I switched off the tv so fast I...don't really know what happened. Long story short: I dislike the dub somewhat. I have seen every anime episode, and I don't follow the manga(but my friend says I should...). I am currently caught up too. I wonder if you'll read this review...Because once people finish a story, they normally stop reading and replying to reviews. And I mean, you have almost 200 here now, so you probably will just not see this or something. That is sad, because you are making great references and using great romanji japanese in your story, and it is written like that the perfect way that I like to write in and read. YOu are such a good writer, I will add you to my favorite authors list just for this story. So there. But,... I would really like it if you replied to this...It would make me feel like someone read this and realized that I cared...
| Sora Tayuya chapter 1 . 12/18/2009
Wow. I was looking at your other Bleach stories (and I must say, I am not a fan of yaoi or Ichigo/Hitsugaya), and this one...suprised me. It had a theme I could relate to, and it was one of the few you had written that wasn't Ichigo/Hitsugaya. This really blew me away, very excellent writing style, and I love how japanese it is. Very, very nice. All of the chapters are in japanese too. I am currently privately studing japanese characters of katakana and hiragana, but I have not gone far yet enought to know the chapter headings, sorry! I do love how real this is, and also, I do so enjoy the Gin/Matsumoto pair. Very nice. Even though this looks complete, and I usually only review every 5 or so chapters on already completed stories, this story may need me to review more often than that. Heck, you may break the 200 mark when I'm done here! Anyway, I think I am going to enjoy this...