Reviews for If I Died
SetTheTruthFree chapter 1 . 8/8/2007
that was a good dialogue, i don't tihnk i could ever write just dialogue
siriuslyremus chapter 1 . 8/8/2007
aw that was so sweet and cute and fluffy! i liked it! :D
Riku-Rocks chapter 1 . 8/8/2007
This story is oddly touching (I didn't truly expect that) and bittersweet (that I expected). It reads well, especially for a dialog only story. I cannot help but wonder if the horrid seventh book inspired this or effected it at all.
Jordanne chapter 1 . 8/8/2007
aww... sirius is so much better than chocolate... one time my siser hypnotized me and was all "who do you like" and i said "no-one" and shes like "whats his name" and i reply "sirius black" and now she wont stop teasing me :( but it was funny
TheLittleScientist chapter 1 . 8/8/2007
how sweet! You're very good at writing dialogue . . . I wasn't confused at all.
SweetSouthernGal chapter 1 . 8/8/2007
it was confusing as to whether or not they were together, i though they were until he asked why remus getting married had to do with's good though...really sweet...very touching...
rekahneko chapter 1 . 8/8/2007
Ugh, school. Perhaps it will keep being summer for a few more years. One can only hope.


As always, I am not dissapointed with your story. How you can write a fluffy, sweet scene about funerals I will never know. But you did it!
HelplessRomantic chapter 1 . 8/8/2007
WOW. That was... excellent. You are definitely the best dialogue only author out there. :D

I ADORE the fact that James interupts with the incest joke! :D

One of my favorites for sure. I love it.
PeterPetrelliIsMyHero chapter 1 . 8/8/2007
omg that was cute! so faved.

the chocolate and the confessions were SOO good. You're an excellent writer jules. :D
hermionegranger47393 chapter 1 . 8/8/2007

That was beyond cute. Honestly.

You made the dreaded and boring all-dialogue seem GOOD! No, not good - Excellent with a capital E. YAY!

I LOVED the ending and especially the part where Sirius told him that he would put chocolate on his grave instead of flowers. That was adorable and AWWness. Excellent creativity! :D

And oohh, I almost cried at the part where Sirius told him that he would wear black and white on his birthday and death day. :,)

“I’m glad that I’m not dying soon either. Putting chocolate on my grave would be a big waste of chocolate.”

“Of course it is. Your precious chocolate should be saved for the living.”

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