|Reviews for A Proper Romance|
| Guest chapter 24 . 10/26
Wouldn't the easier solution be to leave the good bits in and change the rating to M? I've never understood the need that some authors have to make their readers chase around for missing scenes for a ludicrous change in rating. It is what it is, who are you trying to impress? Some teeny bopper or ignorant thumper? Screw them! Grow a pair and be true to yourself and your writing as you intended it to be. Thank you for the rant, most enjoyable, like your story until this point.
| Guest chapter 2 . 9/29
Honestly, this makes no sense. If Harry goes around spreading his seed and making 20 babies that's 20 half siblings that can't marry each other and will have to look elsewhere for spouses. Then say each of them actually manages to find someone to marry and they each have 2 kids then there's 40 grandchildren of Harry's (and 80 great grandchildren if you keep the math going) that will have to look elsewhere.
Half siblings is still considered incest. By you not using logic, you just made the problem worse. Telling men to go and spread their seed around will lead to half siblings not knowing they're half siblings and then marrying each other. This will make the likelihood of birth defects higher and quite possibly produce more squibs.
Congratulations...you just killed magic because you and a lot of illogical harem writers hate using simple math and genetics (look up defects brought on by dog breeding, might be more your educational level). It's like you lack the ability to plan ahead. Brainless Gryffindors strike again!
| waterfallits chapter 78 . 8/20
| marisamarinee chapter 15 . 6/25
loving the developing relationship between the two of them! :)
| marisamarinee chapter 11 . 6/25
George is great!
| Simona Polle chapter 78 . 4/20
I had so much fun reading your story!
Huggs from Chile!
| r99smith chapter 78 . 2/1
I recently found this story, I enjoyed it very much. I am looking forward to reading the sequel. thanks for writing
| FlameOfHades chapter 78 . 1/31
Beautiful story. I enjoyed every moment.
It was lovely to read something different from the death and despair of the War they lived through. The exploration of each other was very satisfying and real to see.
| mama123 chapter 78 . 1/15
Really really well written. Usually , I don't read more than a few chapters of romance fic like this because the authors turn our couple into sappy little fluffy bunnies. That is soo out of charaters that it makes me wanna vomit! But ur fic was refreshing and believable. May slightly out of characters but it would come to how they are suppose to be. I enjoyed it very much. Thanks for sharing! .
| Guest chapter 78 . 1/11
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| Dimac99 chapter 78 . 11/11/2014
A lovely slow build toward believable love. Lots of detail, natural sounding dialogue, and I liked the little detour over to the Buffyverse which was well paced and not allowed to overshadow the rest of the fic. The beat-Voldy competition winner was hilarious. I'd totally read *that* fic! (I probably have, come to think of it!)
| Guest chapter 7 . 11/10/2014
i swear these titles are more funny than 'In which Hermione goes something' I forgot what its called but it was where hermione's parents die and she pretty much goes crazy
| Emily chapter 78 . 8/18/2014
This was very well written, and your characters enjoyable. However, I would have enjoyed it more if it had been shorter. You lost me when they went to the states.
| rebeccakelsey chapter 2 . 7/28/2014
Subtle Buffy reference! AH! That was just... So unexpected and awesome.
Kindness is the best accessory,
| hermionefan1983 chapter 50 . 6/30/2014
so is hermione bisexual in a way? He looked content with her answer, and sat down on the bed across from her. "So, here's what I don't understand. You're fine with the idea of male or female bed mates, but you've only had sex with Ron and me."
"I have very high standards." She smiled and then continued on, "I was in mourning for a very long time. By the time I wasn't, most of the men I was interested in were married to other women, and they didn't start looking at me until the law passed. I've never met a woman I liked enough to want to sleep with. Ginny's lovely, but she might as well be my little sister. Plus, I'm not a big fan of casual sex. I wouldn't want to go pick someone up in a bar. I want to want the person I'm sleeping with, and on first brush I haven't yet met anyone I wanted that way. I have to know the person first."
"Does it bother you that just about all the sex I've had was casual?"
"Not terribly." She paused, thinking. "Well, a little, actually. But I understand you weren't looking for the same thing I was. And I surely understand that we both desire people differently. The last ten minutes is a testament to that. Besides, I don't have any right to be upset about your past, not when I said yes to your present and future knowing about it. Although I'd appreciate you not doing it in the future."
"You're the only one I'm planning on sleeping with in the future."
"I don't think it'll work out that way." She kept her face straight, and his fell a bit. Then she spoke quickly, smiling, before he got too upset: "I'm sure when we have kids they'll want to sleep with us as well."
He lunged across the bed, scattering Defeat Lord Voldemort proposals and tackling her with tickles.
"The little buggers can sleep on the floor. You're mine."