Reviews for offspring's path
Luiz4200 chapter 6 . 7/29/2014
9-1-1 in Japan?
Jack-chan88 chapter 2 . 12/29/2008
I really want to read this, but there are too many grammar mistakes that I can't understand what's going on in the story. I'm sorry, but for now, you won't get many reviews because of so many mistakes. If you fix the grammar and spelling mistakes, then I will read this again. But I will stop at this chapter until changes are met...if none are changed, then I will not read this. Good luck, for Im sure this can be a great story!

-Jack-chan88
xKitKatex chapter 29 . 7/31/2008
just passing a note to say how hooked i was reading this story!

i can see a lot of potenial for a sequal and look forward to hopefully seeing one soon :)
Broken Horizon chapter 1 . 11/2/2007
that was awsome