Reviews for The Dolls Heart
Exalted Demi-Soul chapter 1 . 4/20/2013
Hahaha! Nice to see Asuka played a part in bringing a politician into the family.
Tech-Man chapter 1 . 9/3/2010
Great story, truly awesome.
Alpha Taco chapter 1 . 3/7/2010
My head hurts. It's a great story, but... ow... I beat my head upon a few things while reading it.
Archdruid-Sephiroth chapter 1 . 10/9/2008
Not bad. In fact, I enjoyed it greatly. Kinda fairytale-esque in a way but in a good way. Good work.
Gileh chapter 1 . 5/4/2008
BAHAHAHAH! id have to say the funniest line you had was...

"oh shinji, your hips move so well!"

i had to stop myself from laughing. ] good workt hough.
HinataHyuugaandUzumakiNaruto chapter 1 . 2/6/2008
i like the sex part. maybe u should write another fanfic but with more sex with it. GANBATTE
Rose1948 chapter 1 . 12/27/2007
Now THIS is sweet! It captures the natures of Rei and Shinji without making them caricatures of themselves. I enjoyed reading this very much.

Thanks for sharing.
Scarabeye3000 chapter 1 . 12/21/2007
A bit rushed... wasn't fulfilled, but wasn't bored also...

Good job.

Ja ne
CrazyBloodMoon chapter 1 . 12/13/2007
good story man... sobeautifull to see (read) true love as it should be, even if some people dont understand it, the only thing that matters is the love that the two people share... [ - X
Anonomous chapter 1 . 11/11/2007
You just had to name the kids after most of the main characters of Inuyasha, didn't you?
unknown user chapter 1 . 11/7/2007
I like this. I has a pretty exceptional amount of plot, considering the fact that it is entirely a lemon, and it has no major spelling or grammatical errors (though I've noticed in the past that lemons, and erotic fiction in general, come in two main categories: stupid stories written by horny teenagers who can't write properly and have probably never had sex (the equivalent of a typical american porno), and well-thought-out stories that simply express the author's understanding of the joy of sex between two people who are in love).

Good job :-)
Andrew Hildreth chapter 1 . 10/24/2007
First of all, let me say that I freakin LOVED this story. Shinji/Rei pairings are always my favorites. I like the new take you made on this, it's one of the most original I've seen (and I've read quite a few). I only noticed one thing wrong with your story: men don't get vasectomies. Only women do. A vasectomy is when a woman gets her uterus removed (for future reference).

However, all in all, a GREAT story. You labeled it Chapter 1, does that mean that there will be additions to the story, I hope?
KAZEONI chapter 1 . 10/14/2007
This was a lovely story I like the ending the Inuyasha names seem to fit for their kids I wish this was a part of the show I think it would be nice. You have true talent Gunman. Keep up the good work.
Alex XIII chapter 1 . 9/12/2007
woah i just realized ive been reading evangelion lemons like all day
zerox144 chapter 1 . 9/8/2007
O_O *drool for real* that was so unnessecarily arousing it makes me feel all warma and fuzzy. i think im in love with this story.
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