|Reviews for Looking for that one girl|
| michelous chapter 3 . 1/14
| guest chapter 10 . 10/14/2015
the only thing that i myself see wrong is a few spelling errors but besides that i really enjoyed this story that you spent your time working on:).
| Kaze1412 chapter 10 . 4/15/2015
OH MY GOSH! THIS ENTIRE STORY WAS SO CUUUTE! Please write a sequel to it if you can! I hope you keep writing more stories like this! Also, I would love it if you wrote another story where Allen is a girl. I'm looking forward to it! ;)
| NekoYullenDragonAssassin chapter 10 . 3/20/2015
OH MY GOD! You have to write a sequel where they get marrief and have kids! It would be soooooooooooo cute! kawaii!
| AliceXxX chapter 10 . 1/29/2014
I just died a wonderful no-regret death :') A death of HAPPINESS!
| snowwulfx chapter 10 . 6/19/2013
omg awesome story! thx for writing this :D
| BLEACHLOVER101 chapter 7 . 5/30/2013
Haha I started cheering when cross came I like this story so far
| pikachu2510 chapter 10 . 2/20/2013
awwww! that story was sooooo kawaiii! 1 part confused me tho, wen Rhode took Allen n Kanda said "y should we go around looking 4 some random girl from the street",i was wondering... the girl that was taken was the 1 that Kanda loved, shouldnt he be worried? i thought Kanda was way 2 OOC tho... i understand how he ha the story 2 progress buh i thought he was 2 sweet, though it was really cute, i think tsundere Kanda is good XD 2 me Kanda being occasionally sweet would have made it better buh 2 much sweet Kanda is kinda weird 4 me o.O cold Kanda is a sexy Kanda :D
| Dduckyx0x chapter 7 . 9/30/2012
Aw2www poor cross his baby girl does need him anymore
| taylorbuu23 chapter 10 . 8/11/2012
Aww! I loved the ending so much!
I think I fell in love with this story along the way of reading it!
| B e a s t l y B chapter 10 . 7/26/2012
ha,ha that was great...
| Guest chapter 10 . 7/19/2012
what type of ending was that?
| 1o1 chapter 1 . 7/18/2012
I love this story! One of the best Yullen fanfics I have red do far!
| The 14th Undertaker chapter 7 . 6/28/2012
Aww... Cross is being so fatherly...
| flygon3300 chapter 10 . 3/30/2012
that was so cheesy
in a good way XD