|Reviews for Terminal|
| Kanon58 chapter 1 . 3/7/2014
rolf baka luke XDDDD
| AntiSora chapter 1 . 6/30/2010
Haha! Oh, that was PRICELESS. Oh, I was highly amused when Tear confronted Luke. XD Oh, Jade is just made of WIN. XD
Nicely written, absolutely adorable and hilarious. XD
| KaUiA chapter 1 . 1/11/2010
Short, funny and cute!
I love it!
Luke can be a little bit too dense sometimes!
Tear's just about the same way too!
Ha ha ha...
| NexusTehULF0o chapter 1 . 11/13/2008
Aw, Luke...How adorable.
I absolutely loved Jade in this fic. You had him spot on! * fav *
~ Thanks for the read!
| Kirenza chapter 1 . 10/4/2008
Silly Jade. I really loved this! Great dialogue and everything! :D
| Shining Flame Luke chapter 1 . 8/4/2008
Jade really evil!
AH! Nice to see another LukexTear
| Nameless for now chapter 1 . 7/9/2008
That was absolutely adorable. XD I love how Luke thought he had something deadly the whole time when he was actually just crushing.
Tear seemed a bit OOC for a moment, but it worked. P:
And Jade's awesome. I loved, "Nothing had ever terrified Guy more in all of his life as when he awoke, in the dark of the night, to the cynical laughter of the Necromancer." especially. I can just imagine that. XD
But seriously, wonderful job on this fic. :) I enjoyed it a lot.
| Jillian Leonhart chapter 1 . 5/3/2008
Kya!How cute! Luke is a lovesick little puppy!I wanna cuddle him!That is really a great idea!
| TechNomaNcer28 chapter 1 . 3/12/2008
Cute story. Jade's such a smart-ass and so totally the bad guy here,in a good way of course.
| firedragongirl chapter 1 . 11/5/2007
LMAO! This was great. Jade is so... ugh! XD
| iTomato chapter 1 . 10/6/2007
Oh My God. That was amazing. I absolutely loved the way you wrote Jade-snark, sarcasm, and awesome, perfectly done. And even the little notes about the other characters were spot on! Like the line about Guy jumping a hundred feet away-excellent XD
And I LOVED this bit:
Nothing had ever terrified Guy more in all of his life as when he awoke, in the dark of the night, to the cynical laughter of the Necromancer.
Had me laughing like woah.
So yes. I loved this fic so much. Characterizations of everyone were spot on. Luke/Tear for the win! Wonderful writing! :D
| Fire Lord Castiel chapter 1 . 9/14/2007
Oh My Gosh! That was so cute!
| Hattertant chapter 1 . 8/14/2007
Oh shoot I'm so sorry for favoriting it and then forgetting to review...I know that must have pissed you off. :(
Anyway...This was a pretty funny story, how Jade solves the mysterious 'disease'. Great job!
| frostneko chapter 1 . 8/13/2007
I like Luke's "Condition" and how Jade reacts to it.
| Azure Teriques chapter 1 . 8/12/2007
Nice ending. I like it Very funny. Never saw it coming.