Reviews for Initiation
Firewolves16 chapter 1 . 12/4/2012
The ending is hilarious. Poor Nemu. Do another chapter and show what happens to her.
SanDavis687 chapter 1 . 12/2/2012
Lmao :)
Nelarun chapter 1 . 5/27/2011
Ahahahahahahahaha! this is great! Brilliant in fact! _. Thanks.

Nela
Azuna10 chapter 1 . 5/4/2011
. .MORE...
thisaccountisold chapter 1 . 8/4/2010
That was funny I almost wet myself laughing
Aquamarine Columbine chapter 1 . 11/14/2009
Oh...my...God...*chokes*

*shakes head* I cannot say how much I pity them right now...awesome.
ryokablade chapter 1 . 11/2/2009
LOL XD LOVE IT!

This is SO freakin funny!

For some reason, I can imagine this as a Shinigami Golden Cup...

*5 stars* Good Job!
kaibasgirlx chapter 1 . 7/1/2009
ROFL! Omg, that was hilarious, running into Shunsui like that! What a grand twist!

~Téa
gotNoAccount chapter 1 . 3/2/2009
last line to story:

'Little did ether of them know that they where running through Kyouraku's shortcut on his commune to the local bar...'
Renji's Girll chapter 1 . 12/7/2008
Oh, yeah. Blushes for everyone. Shunsui will think he was dreaming!
Rabanete chapter 1 . 4/26/2008
I wonder if Nemu knew they were there xD

Hilarious.
silver-moon-sapphire-sky chapter 1 . 4/19/2008
Now that was hilarious- Good fic, well written, funny... what more can I say? Keep writing.
YumeEnjaku chapter 1 . 4/16/2008
-thinks carefully-

Hmm, Soi, Nanao, you should run as fast as you can, so no one can see you...(I feel bad for them DX)

D
DeKayHawk chapter 1 . 2/21/2008
lol...nice idea!
Sir Edward chapter 1 . 9/12/2007
Yes! _

That's the greatest thing I've read in a while! _

Purely EVIL! _

But, to waste the chance to see two of the most beautiful women in the Gotei 13...?

Poor Nanao-chan... O_O

She must be terrified! _

Keep up the good work!

Sir Edward
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