Reviews for Night
johnnyd2 chapter 1 . 10/11/2008
Interesting story. though i mightve enjoyed it more had i actually read the twelth hour. but still, decent story.
Haruka Minamino chapter 1 . 8/4/2008
...So Orsino had his recompense after all. XD

Brilliant, and not at all fake.
moonreader chapter 1 . 5/12/2008
Very nice, and sweet, though Viola seems a little OoC.

One suggestion: "What a brazen wench she!" is definitely not Shakespearian English. Did you mean to say, ""What a brazen wench she *is*!"? That would be fine.

Thanks for writing Shakespeare! "If tales do be the food of love, write on..."

moonreader
Rebecca chapter 1 . 12/9/2007
I really think you portray the characters well.