|Reviews for Love At First Site|
| James Birdsong chapter 2 . 4/1/2013
Nice two chapters
| Priest-of-Gaia chapter 1 . 8/9/2007
O. Nice beginning. Very interesting attention grabber...What will happen next. Two minor corrections...The description of her. "Sleeky black hair." It should be Sleek. and 10 lines down the sentence that says it took him 4 entire days an nights...forgot the d...just picking at it. _ I like the beginning a lot though...please continue.