|Reviews for The Prince and the Troublesome Maiden|
| Yukino-chan chapter 1 . 4/26
LOL! Good story indeed!
| xXxConimaxXx chapter 1 . 2/8
Beautiful. I Love it! XD
| Calliecature chapter 1 . 10/29/2014
aaaaww... that is so sweet! and you got me laughing at their antics and irks. hey, if you want a more decent feedback, just ask me questions about your fic :)
| slashAvenger chapter 1 . 7/10/2014
Quite a rare pairing but executed exceedingly well.
| Tar-Celebrian chapter 1 . 3/1/2014
Thanks for this story !
I had a great time reading it. I don't really remember if Yoshino's past was ever revealed in Naruto, but I think your fiction fits the background pretty well. From my point of view, this is how it could have happened (having said that, I still think that Yoshino is also a ninja, but it's not really important).
I appreciated in particular when in the bar, Shikaku realise that he was no different from the men assaulting Yoshino. I always hate stories where the guy tries everything, bothers the girl to no end, etc. and finally, one day, said girl discovers that she likes the guy (leading to the question does she like to be abused ?). No way.
I think this story is credible, coherent, tender and kind. It is about a true relationship based on trust and love. I love it. Both lazy Shikaku and terrible Yoshino were in character, what more could I ask for ? :)
(please forgive my English, its not my mothertongue)
| Reading Nut Cassirole chapter 1 . 2/12/2014
I wondered if u were gonna write this as a separate story :) loved this and the invitation trilogy
keep up the good work :)
| LoveGlutton chapter 1 . 1/30/2014
Nice. Got one for naruto's
| rebecca chapter 1 . 1/2/2013
Love it! Well done, and I like how you merged into it from Shikamaru and Temari's picnic.
| candsandn chapter 1 . 12/15/2012
at what point does this occur in invitation?
| chaos599 chapter 1 . 10/16/2012
Hahaha, that was great. Very much warm and fuzzy feelings!
| kaloobia chapter 1 . 9/3/2012
That was AWESOME! i forgot completely that Shikamaru was telling the story! Please make more!
| Tomon chapter 1 . 8/3/2012
Awesome! Nothing else describe it so well :-D
| xBrokenRecordx chapter 1 . 3/4/2012
Awwwwwwwwwww! I love ShikakuxYoshino (not to mention, ShikaTema. But who doesn't?) All the classic couples are just so sweet and "D'aww!" worthy.
And the whole Lazy Nara/Troublesome Woman relationships are just laugh inducing.
(Temari is way more troublesome than Ino. Nuff said.)
| PrincessLazyPants chapter 1 . 1/18/2012
Wow...I've never read this pairing before but this story was wonderfully crafted and beautiful. I'm glad I read it.
| littlemelonatplay chapter 1 . 12/3/2011
This couple never piqued my interest until today and it lead me to find a story on this website because the manga doesn't really talk about them. After I read this, I felt like this story fit them. I'm glad I read it. Thanks for posting, it was a hilarious plot with good ideas.