Reviews for Temptation
FashionFable chapter 4 . 5/6
I thought Kakashi would go kick ass. No police report? Shouldn't police have escorted her home? No ambulances for both he and Naruto? Its a crime to not report a shooting incident you are involved in especially if you leave the other person to die. I mean I loce this author but this one disappointed me. Can't even read the lemon part. Both her and Kakashi would get accessory to murder and the whole lolita trial thing. Sorry moodiful. :/ I love love love your work but this hard so much potential and lost the realism for me :(
FashionFable chapter 3 . 5/6
Did anyone call the police and ambulance for Naruto?
BeautifulMagic LoveAffair chapter 4 . 3/31/2015
FIRST THINGS FIRST, THIS NEEDS A SEQUEL (!)
Perhaps one where she goes to college and he's a teacher there too (hehehehe why am I doing this to myself?) and he's still head over heels for her, but he's broken her heart by not keeping contact or something (basically anything that made her really sad) and so now it's his turn to win her over.
Also, by college, I mean University (don't really know where your from or HOW you refer to it so yeah...)

Hopefull, given by my enthusiasm and craving for a sequel to this, it was made quite clear that I ABSOLUTELY LOVED THIS! I promise you, I loved everything. Every. Bloody. Part. Of. It. Like seriously. Everything. EVERYTHING

Only thing I'd say is that I was quite confused about where this was set and why no one dialed 911 or anything when Naruto *sniff* *sniff* died...
But yeah. I LOVEDDD ITTTTTT
JustAnotherMaybe chapter 4 . 3/9/2015
I don't like it nor do I hate it, but it seems too sad of a story not to be considered beautiful.
feke399 chapter 4 . 11/27/2014
Why did Naruto have to die D: ? I was crying so hard :( ! but it was a great story, I loved it :D only the ending was a little bit sad I had hoped they would be together ;( please write a sequel :3 !
cherryflowerblossoms chapter 4 . 7/6/2014
Sequel of them remeeting when she is older?
Guest chapter 3 . 2/10/2014
What the hell! Her friend could be there in the car dying or worse, already dead and all she does is tell what happened and then have sex? The police is a phone call away, people! How selfish can they get? The lemon could have been great if I wasn't so busy thinking about what's happening to Naruto. Damn! Lust or love or whatever you call it between them could only take you so far but forgetting that someone you know could possibly be a cold corpse right now and you still can afford to have sex? That's revolting. Even Kakashi should have had half the mind to at least maybe chack up on him, Naruto, that is. And where are your fucking friends when you need them?! God damn!
sakura.haruno.love58 chapter 4 . 8/18/2013
*sniff* n-naruto is dead? *sniff* t-those b-bitches! Poor Sasuke! Poor Sakura!Poor NARUTO! *sniff* good.. job.. I liked the story...:')
marmotta chapter 1 . 10/30/2012
Hello, I'm not sure if you go to understand my patetic attempt of my english review but I just would want to say you that your history is great. I would like you continue it doing kakashi and Sakura meet again.

thanks
Guest chapter 4 . 10/15/2012
Awww, that was kind of a sad ending yet a nice one too.
Rusala chapter 4 . 10/8/2012
Loved it so much! It was beautifully written and personally I think it was artistically complete. It would be nice if there was a sequel but at the same time its perfect just the way it is. Loved it soo much!
Mr.Foox chapter 4 . 5/2/2012
... words can't describe how much i love this story TT3TT It's just... beautiful!
EWHH its Kenna chapter 4 . 3/24/2012
This was utterly amazing. I can't get over how impressed I was.
Yo To The Peoples chapter 4 . 6/29/2011
I'm lost for words. How can something be this breathtaking?
sephiroth-itachi chapter 4 . 2/27/2011
That was great and a sequal can really be in the works here. I would love to see how adult Sakura would handle seeing Kakashi again.

Oh PS: Why did Naru have to die? I know it would have been unrealistic if he didnt but that was still messed up T.T

Thanks for the great fic.
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