|Reviews for The Lusting|
| GroveWolf chapter 1 . 1/5
i've been reading your series and its been good, the cross overs are creeping me out just a bit though. I think a Ron Shego Kim or Ron and Ladies as you've done before would be fine, but maybe not crossed with a horror theme. your batman crossover was good and i liked it so crossovers aren't bad, just horror ones.
| Max6 chapter 14 . 12/17/2013
This is probably the all-time best KP fanfiction series EVER! :) My hat is well and truly off to you, sir... or at least, it would be if I owned one. ;D
Can't wait to see what you come up with next in this brilliant series.
| Bagget00 chapter 14 . 11/7/2013
I just read the entire series of KP fics you wrote over the course of a day. I really like them and hope you choose to continue. I like you're blend of horror movie and romance lovey dovey.
| Fulgrim chapter 14 . 1/11/2013
This is a truly magnificent fanfiction series, and I dearly hope you continue it one day. Nice touch having Rufus communicate in a more verbose manner, and using Michael Dorn's voice if I'm not mistaken?
Until next time! :D
| Cyendrea chapter 14 . 12/30/2012
good story. I enjoyed the read.
| lordsesshomaru2 chapter 14 . 9/21/2012
This is a very nice series you've got written; and I'm going to look forward to more of it. I really like how you've managed to keep the characters "in character" in the situations you've put them in. I can't wait to see where you'll take it next.
| Daki92 chapter 14 . 6/2/2011
Very amusing in the end and all in all quite good. I hope the series is not permanently finished and that you will manage to wrap up your current story before i get to the latest chapter lol
| Power Taco chapter 14 . 1/2/2011
I don't want to demand you hurry up with your other stories and keep making sequels to this, but if you could that'd be fantastic. Very much a fan of the series, but would prefer it stay at the 3 people stage if at all possible. Either way can't wait for an update.
| The Grinning Psychopath chapter 13 . 12/8/2010
yeahh, i don't think i want Ron/Kim/Shego/Yori, i mean its nothing of how you portrayed her or anything in this story, its jsut that well... well i i just could never really see Ron with Yori, i'm not racist or anything, i just, don't really see Ron with Yori. same goes for Ron/Kim/Shego/Monique, i never really liked Monique that much, to be honest
now maybe a bit of Ron/Shego/Kim/Gloria Passion. now thats a pairing i really would be interested in seeing, even if it was only for a chapter or two and not a whole story.
| The Grinning Psychopath chapter 14 . 11/18/2010
Hahh! oh that is so typical Drakken... at first i thought he was gonna end up cloning Yuri, but then when i heard slime residue.. oh man, just knew he was gonna end up cloning one of those two dead girls. lol.
really? well i guess i myself have taken breaks on my own stories and stuff.. still please come up with a sequel to this Soooon!
we still gotten Mr Possible's response to Shego/Kim/Ron's relationship yet, and i am OHHH soo eager for that little explosion... great story.. definitely a best seller, if it were an actual story, lol... *Grin*
| ty chapter 14 . 10/26/2010
Great series. U have a great writting style and an original flair. Tho I hope this isn't the end so soon I think u could squeeze a few more stories out of it maybe even 5 as long as you use the write plot lines lol. Hope to see more of this seires soon.
| echo482 chapter 14 . 7/2/2010
are you going to keep this series going it is verry good and the lemon was good and you are writing in the M so don't say you can't write a lemon untell you try you'll never know if you dont try anyways can't wait to see vol.5
| Clutch28 chapter 1 . 6/15/2010
Normally I'm not a fan of non-canon pairing but I must say I'm really enjoying this KiRonGo trio arc you've developed here. While I'm not such a fan of the part in the story where Monique, the cheerleaders and Mankey are being voyeurs, I will admit it added a bit of humor to the story. I'm more of a fan of the interplay of the trio's relationship and love and how each is effected by the other 2 in the relationship. While I'm also not a fan of horror per say, I did like how these events shaped how they work with each other.
I'd like for this trio relationship arc to continue but I'd like to see more of the surrounding issues of this relationship played out. Keep action in the stories of course as well as the dialogue and interplay between the three of them and less on the horror. Lemons are okay, but I think that just cause it's a threesome airing that there isn't room for more of the broader aspects of what their love is about. Also adding someone to the mix to me would just take away from what could be a compelling arc.
Just my 2 cents
| Itachi's aprentice chapter 14 . 4/24/2010
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