|Reviews for Bill's Story The Battle and the End of the War|
| Spiralling-Down chapter 15 . 10/23/2011
Wow. This was brilliant. I've been crying from Chapter 2 onwards. Fred's death was always the worst, mostly because of George, but partly just because the twins were my favourite characters.
| Guest chapter 15 . 10/13/2011
I love this story! I cried! I also loved how you included the thestrals! Amazing really!
| Snarky64 chapter 15 . 9/26/2011
Absolutely stunning work of real quality. Excellent. I cried.
| owlinacloak chapter 15 . 8/26/2011
Just sad. All the Dead-Fred stuff make my eyes well up :(
| Dimcairien chapter 15 . 10/21/2010
Great story. I liked having Bill's perspective. One doesn't see it very often.
| JinxTheDreamer chapter 4 . 5/1/2010
It's so true to Bill's character how even under those circumstances, he wanted to be the "clever, stronger, brave older brother, putting things right for the others..."
By the way, I like how this story is from Bill's POV! There aren't enough (good ones) of those :)
| JinxTheDreamer chapter 2 . 5/1/2010
"It never occurred to Bill to doubt what George had just told him. The twins were so close, it was inconceivable that one would die without the other knowing. Even as his mind formed the words: "Are you sure?" Bill realised how stupid they were. Of course George was sure. How could Fred die and George not know?" That's the best part so far (and the part that *almost* made me cry)...I really think it would be impossible for George not to know right away!
| RavenEcho chapter 15 . 1/5/2010
Excellently done once again. Interesting to see it from Bill's eyes.
| FredWeasleyLivesOn chapter 5 . 7/17/2009
George was huddled in the alcove, clinging to Fred’s body as he himself had done earlier. Bill saw Percy crouch down and put a hand on George’s shoulder, speaking quietly to him
| 5redroses chapter 15 . 4/20/2009
| girlfan1979 chapter 15 . 4/11/2009
You did a good job with this. It's a sad story, but one worth telling.
| brigrove chapter 13 . 1/7/2009
Of COURSE a cup of tea can cure anything! The French just don't understand.
(Yes, I'm British, but I'm a traitor as I prefer coffee)
| The One And Only Lobster chapter 15 . 7/15/2008
I started crying near the end there. Oh, Fred! This was an excellent first fic even though the chapters were very short. It was also very sad. :(
| PamelaKatt chapter 15 . 6/22/2008
Sad but lovely story. I believe that this is as close to canon as you can be without morphing into JRK herself. Excellent job I will be reading some of your other works now.
| FrednGeorgeFanGirl chapter 5 . 6/6/2008
Flitwick? did he die in the battle? i didn't know that if he did..
anyway i've read this story before a while ago but i'm not sure if i reviewed so i will now. it's beautiful especially for a first fic and it make me cry