Reviews for Bill's Story The Battle and the End of the War
SomedayEngland chapter 8 . 1/19/2008
Oh, I got chills at Voldemort's line. That must have been so heart stopping and terrifying.
SomedayEngland chapter 7 . 1/17/2008
I really don't know what to say, except that this is very good. I don't know how to say that I like something this sad - heartbreaking - but it is most definitely well written. If this had been in the book (and it is good enough to be) I don't know what I would have done. I have never cried harder in my life than when I first saw that Fred was dead, and that was just one little line. This is by far the best that I have seen for the Weasleys finding out. You are officially my absolute favourite Weasley Author.
SomedayEngland chapter 4 . 1/17/2008
It seems to me that George would be a bit more...devastated. I think that he would find it hard to even talk, or get his mind to work past something as horrifying and mind numbing as Fred being gone.
SomedayEngland chapter 3 . 1/17/2008
Oh, George. Even though he knows, I can imagine that it still hasn't set in nearly as hard as it will. That's the only explnation for him to just keep fighting.
SomedayEngland chapter 1 . 1/17/2008
Oh, I a am getting all angsty and sad already with this one. I finally decided that I should read it, since it came first. It is already living up to the beautiful misery of your others. "See you later..."
Boudicca's Revolt chapter 15 . 1/12/2008
I love it! It was very poignant but blast, you made me cry. I do have to say, Molly is the shit!
DontAvadaSnuffles chapter 15 . 1/4/2008
Wow...that was...well, just wow.

I don't know what else to say.

Except that I liked it very much.

You've got a real talent there.

I can't wait to read more stories by you!
Snickerpoodle chapter 15 . 1/1/2008
GrandmaBeth chapter 15 . 12/6/2007
Wonderful story! I cried my eyes out! I love Bill too, but Molly is my favorite! Grandma Beth
LilyXJames chapter 15 . 12/6/2007
i was near tears more than ten times... when i first read the part in the book i couldnt believe my eyes so i read it more than once, then i cried threw my book out of my room...then a minute later i started reading again...just wanting to finish the book...with tears in my eyes...and when i read that tonks and REMUS died too i cried my heart out then started to laugh at myself...

anyway... i love your story...keep up the good work...

runningfingers chapter 15 . 12/4/2007
This was such a good story. I loved how you thought to mention the thestrals at the end.
runningfingers chapter 6 . 12/4/2007
This chapter was really good and also sad. You portrayed the emotions so well.
mimosa chapter 15 . 11/24/2007
It really is very awesome to see the Thestrals. It is a great shame that they could only be seen when death has been witnessed.

Congratulations for completing a fanfic. It was a fast paced, interesting ride.
mimosa chapter 14 . 11/24/2007
I really love the moment between Bill and Remus, when the former paid his respects to the latter. Little did Bill know that his Victoire will be Teddy's girlfriend. Yay!
mimosa chapter 13 . 11/24/2007
LOL. I love the way you wrote Fleur's part. It is hard writing French English... and a Veela French English at that.

A very emotionally draining chapter... but, in a rather calm way.
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