Reviews for When I become buchou
Guest chapter 1 . 10/4/2013
"Rokakku," Echizen supplied, rolling his eyes, "I don't want to be buchou, Momo-senpai can be buchou…"
Fourteen-chii chapter 1 . 9/7/2011
"he randomly assigns laps, never smiles, hates the world..."

xD lol. laughtrip
BrIdGeT-tsuchi chapter 1 . 9/26/2009
Nice way to end this story.

now if you'd excuse me, i think ill head over to my room and laugh my head off.
PrincessKrystal01 chapter 1 . 2/3/2009
hahaha Atobe a narcissist, Tezuka's emo, and Yukimura is the candyman!
shadowninja-yuna chapter 1 . 1/25/2009
Haha, they're all too cute for my life. :D Love them al
M3lanch0ly chapter 1 . 12/14/2008
LOL. Tezuka assign laps randomly...Yeah right.
Nasty Evil Dead Dog chapter 1 . 5/15/2008
Kirihara for a captain? lol. And, Hiyoshi? ... at least he's not in love with himself. Ryoma as captain? WTF! No way(I imagine lots of kids wearing caps, saying "Mada Mada Dane" -_-').

Awesome fic :D
Mrs Hatake Itachi chapter 1 . 8/27/2007
Nice story!
Rhapsody.Blu chapter 1 . 8/16/2007
Ahahahaha...

Yeah. I'd freak out too. I dunno but a brat as a captain...? O_o;

Kirihara sounds abusive. Hiyoshi sounds harsh. And who knows what would happen when Echizen becomes captain...

They'd probably be the first team to revolt about not doing anything...

Anyways. As I always bugged you for updates on other stuff, I now bug you: UPDATE THAT OTHER STORY ON YOUR OTHER ACCOUNT!

Unless you did and I didn't notice...-coughs-
speadee chapter 1 . 8/15/2007
Good job on the characters! That sounds like them. It sounds like Jackal, Momoshiro, and Mukahi were following or looking for them.
Ashii78 chapter 1 . 8/12/2007
Hah. "Kami-sama what have we done to deserve this?" indeed. Nice, they would all seem to make excellent bunchpu, ne? XD

Wolf
neeny0113 chapter 1 . 8/11/2007
That was nice. Good job. It's about as simple as that xP
Tuli-Susi chapter 1 . 8/11/2007
I personally think the ending was brilliant, especially the omake! i loved all of it! And I have to agree. Hiyoshi, Ohtori and Kabaji from Hyoutei and Kirihara from Rikkaidai are the second years. I couldn't see Ohtori leading Hyoutei, he's too shy, Kabaji doesn't talk and It would be weird if someone was Captain but couldn't even hold a regular spot...
BlackRosex chapter 1 . 8/11/2007
I like this story, Its hialrous.

I hope you continue writing one-shots!
Hijokugei chapter 1 . 8/10/2007
a) I don't know what buchou is...

b) that's hilariously funny... I wonder what would happen if Echizen let his romantic side take over...?
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