|Reviews for The Problem With Masquerade Balls|
| blalala chapter 7 . 3/7
So Natsume's being the usual prick huh?
I don't know what it is, but I find it such a turn on when Natsume's being total jackass in your fic xD
Can't wait to read the next chappie.
| blalala chapter 6 . 3/5
So Natsume had to do it huh?
| blalala chapter 5 . 3/4
You have no idea how much I was giggling like a lunatic between Mikan and the mysteries dancer in the ball. I was such a fangirl mode for them.
It's Natsume isn't it?
I think it was pretty clear from the start he would be her mystery dance partner. But still oh my God, the way he spoke to her was very alluring and intrigued me so much. I wish there are many other ff authors who would write Natsume like this. It's just so appealing and attractive.
Can I just say you're writing is so smooth and professional. I didn't see one minor error spelling and even if there was I'm sure it wasn't really that big deal.
Though I have to admit I was little unsure should I've read this considering I've more than little against crossover fics but thank God that I did. But that's because you're focusing on more on Mikan and Natsume's 'wacky' relationship despite being crossover, that's good enough for me.
Hmm, so you made Ron and Hermione break up huh? I had the feeling you were going to separate those two sooner or later. I have my suspicion that you're planning to have Hermione hook up with Draco? That pairing is just so popular.
Anyway up to the next chapter now :D
| Shuise chapter 1 . 12/16/2013
3 it! XD Plz continue writing! GAMBATE! XD
| kyouyaxXxharuhi chapter 20 . 9/7/2013
OH my! this story is sooo good!
I don't have time to review just for the sake of reading the next chapter :))
hope this story have a sequel ;) KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK :))
| Aritzia1998 chapter 3 . 8/29/2013
Ha ha ha I was kinda expecting that but I really hoped not to but I guess people can't get everything they want. I would be really annoyed to share a room with someone so
Annoying and cocky. Especially if it was a guy.
| Aritzia1998 chapter 2 . 8/29/2013
Hahaha so Natsume, Kitsume and Mochu is basiclly a copy of Draco,Krabby and Goyle I honestly think Natsume is more menacing then Draco.
I like how you made your story so thorough completely combining Alice's and Wizards/Witches together.
Anyways your a great writer I'm looking forward to reading all your other story's.
| Aritzia1998 chapter 1 . 8/29/2013
I really like Mikans personality though I ask why you change Aoi. I also agree with what you said about Permy because she is kinda like Hotaru she is really good friends with someone but doesn't show it. Mochu and Kitsume are like Natsumes Followers.
I really like how you discribed their persona and put them into the groups where they belong instead of them all group.
| Jenna chapter 20 . 8/22/2013
SO CUTE! I loved the entire story so much :D
| Guest chapter 20 . 7/17/2013
Love it *tearing up*
| Mysterious Rain Love chapter 20 . 6/9/2013
This story is so sweet! Mikan and Natsume really was a great couple in this story
| Guest chapter 2 . 5/11/2013
writer-san?i'm a big fan of Gakuen Alice and Harry Potter. I think I can proudly say that I know the books of HP from cover to cover, well almost. When I first came across this fanfiction, I literally jumped for joy. A HP and GA story that is very promising. I’m only up to the 2nd chapter but I already know I’m gonna love this FF. but there is on detail I can’t let go uncorrected. :’( I’m sorry for sounding so rude. :’( It’s just that Harry has black hair, not brown.
| Soccerisawesome19 chapter 1 . 3/29/2013
Really good idea.
| Analatelle chapter 2 . 1/20/2013
Right. I read others reviews and I agree, the story would have been better if it wasn't rushed, not that I'm complaining, i still have to read the rest.
| Pechay chapter 20 . 12/28/2012
Errrmegehrd. Purely a stroke of genius. I love your style of writing. The plot twists are sooo damn epic.