Reviews for Unraveled Feelings
Nonna Nitto chapter 3 . 10/6/2013
Dazzled1 chapter 1 . 8/25/2007
Oh god, this sounds great! I've read Honk If you're...(too lazy to write rest of title), which was very good, and I like where this story is going. Great potential.
Tamzi chapter 3 . 8/25/2007
Liking this so far.
IAMaMUDBLOOD chapter 3 . 8/24/2007
new reader i found the story entertaining. and funny! goodluck on the next chapter. byez
MookyLife chapter 3 . 8/24/2007
Baby seal chapter 3 . 8/24/2007
I love this story so please keep updating!
clap your hands say claire chapter 3 . 8/24/2007
Ha. Yeah. Not bad.
clap your hands say claire chapter 2 . 8/24/2007
Quite good. You didn't really need to explain all the stuff about Diagon Alley, though, because it didn't add anything to the story.

One question: Are you American? Not that I can really tell from your writing, except for the word "Mom", but do Americans spell the word "unravelled" with only one 'l'? Because I'm Australian and it just looks so ... different.
clap your hands say claire chapter 1 . 8/24/2007
Even though Lily's friends wouldn't let her make an Unbreakable Vow that might end in her death, I still like it.

Good job so far. Just watch that you don't use any lines that are really cliched, like "James Potter was an arrogant toerag."

Because I've seen that line a billion times.
mochaddicted79 chapter 2 . 8/18/2007
Aw... James is so cute. Loved the chapter :)
jay jay the jet plane chapter 2 . 8/18/2007
hey! i love the story (plot seems exciting!)

your style of writing is also cool, without any grammatical mistakes :)

just wanted to point out one thing, Peter says he doesnt think he deserves friends like James, Sirius, and Peter. Remus right?

one suggestion: make it a little funnier (especially conversation between the marauders)

i loved the end of chapter 2 haha

update soon!
goatsandboats chapter 2 . 8/17/2007
I love the idea of the unbreakable vow. Update soon!
Danny pettigerw chapter 2 . 8/17/2007
that's it?

it was great but i want more!

its going to be great!

i loved it loved all of it!

keep it up

loved it Danny
Danny Pettigerw chapter 1 . 8/17/2007
Wow!.. its like WOW!

i loved it!

i'll read it all and tell you what i think!

so did you read the 7th harry potter book yet?

love it Danny
marauder girl 78 chapter 2 . 8/17/2007
This is really good...Can't wait to see Lily's reaction...haha...Update please!
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