Reviews for The Strawberry and The Fishcake
Guest chapter 1 . 9/27
Why would transporting change the entirety of the make up of his body? I've seen a few do this and it makes no sense on top of being incredibly annoying.

Want him to use spiritual energy like the Shinigami? Then have him learn. He can already use Chakra which is a mix. Make a seal or some shit so he can split off some for Shinagami abilities.

Especially hate the ones that remove his Chakra entirely to make him a regular human. Bs that it changes some balance so reality itself reshapes him. Worse yet when its a world like DxD with gods, angels, and demons while using that excuse to nerf the hell out of him in a world that already has such bs existing so the reasoning is idiotic.
Kingkong101 chapter 1 . 2/22
All your stories suck Naruto such a bitch ass loser
DracoKing30 chapter 6 . 8/6/2023
Really love this story can't wait for new chapters
Hyperman15 chapter 1 . 9/27/2022
Bruh the story hasn’t even started yet and you put lemons in already.
Alcuard chapter 6 . 7/25/2020
Love it can't wait for the next chapter
YeagerMeister31 chapter 6 . 1/13/2020
Well, that was great can't wait for more shame it's been a decade since the last update
YeagerMeister31 chapter 5 . 1/13/2020
Well, that was another badass chapter seems Byakuya's coming after Naruto how joyful.
YeagerMeister31 chapter 4 . 1/11/2020
Well, that was interesting Naruto saw Sakura again that was nice wonder if he can ever bring her back to life that would be nice can't wait for all the fun he'll have in the soul society
YeagerMeister31 chapter 3 . 1/11/2020
Well, that was amusing and yay some Naruto/Tatsuki time can't wait for more
YeagerMeister31 chapter 2 . 1/11/2020
Well, that was interesting I want some more Naruto/Tatsuki bonding dammit, shame that Sakura had to die the way she did instead of old age she was killed by that vagabond Sasgay.
YeagerMeister31 chapter 1 . 1/9/2020
Well, this seems interesting Naruto's certainly different I hope Tatsuki's in the harem.
Cobalt Conrad chapter 1 . 11/20/2019
Eww. Yuck yuck yuck YUCK! A typical story that made no sense at all. Focused on details and not on the big picture. Started off with nonsense harem route bullshit. Fuck, THAT BURNED MY EYES.
Yugidork221 chapter 6 . 4/18/2019
Hey joe this is one of your readers love the story so far hope you update soon because i want to know what happens next.
slythefoxx2 chapter 1 . 2/20/2019
Wow, a woman almost raped decides to have sex with a complete stranger. With insights like that no need to continue on. Sexist trash.
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